squels loved it yay so cute Adeth oh i love that guy lovely story love a lot want more stories like that please

Yee-ouch. Plot is working though somewhat weak. Ever considered getting a beta reader. Way too many typos and grammatical errors.

WA! NO! WHY RICK? WHY GOD, WHY? *breaks down in sobs* nice story apart from the saddness of our favourite yankies murder! it brought a tear to my eye. poor evie. WA!

That was so cool! I love your story! It's sad that Rick died in the beginning, but I was looking for a Evy/Ardeth story and I found it! This is the first about them that I'm reading and I love it! Congratulations!

Thank you that was good. I had never thought about doing a story with that pairing. Just remember that flames are to be used to light fires! Would I be able to find out who wrote the story that you mentioned? I find that the more it is trashed, the better it is.

Keep Writing, Shorty McGee

Wow...great last chapter! I loved the way you ended it, I think it was totally perfect. In fact, this while last chapter was GREAT. But *sniff* its done...no more waiting for chapters to wait for, no more reading...wow..this is sad.

But I think you did a great job, this fic made me feel so many different emotions, saddnes, happiness, depression, excitment and so on. I also think that everyone was in character. Your new characters were real and just plain cool. I loved you idea and your plot.

Overall I think you have done a great job on this fic. I could tell that throughout the fic you were getting better at writing and such. I will miss this fic...your a very good author. I wish you luck on any future fics!

_krillball6_

_Jessi_

Yay...all is good! I'm so happy! I'm a bit confused though...at the end "Ardeth was write to say 'oh no', he had did everything at Evy's command. He couldn't wait for the baby to be born, he wanted to see his child..and not be following Evy's commands." is he happy or sad...or whats the emotion...it was just a little confusing for me. Anyways! great chapter...please update soon! I'm totally loving this fic! Your rock! *bows* lol Can't wait for the next chapter!

_krillball6_

_Jessi_

*glares* Your evil to cut it off there! lol But I liked it...I can't wait until you update. And you know what...so what if it was short, I mean you update so often, for that I totally love you! lol I don't know how long it will take for me to read the next chapters coming out...I've started school and I'm waiting for the homework to start *sighs*. But ya, I LOVE the story...you are doing such a great job with it!

_krilball6_

_Jessi_

yay!

aw...how sweet at the end. its great ardeth is coming back so soon. and i think the baby is gonna be great! and i think its very sweet that she wants to name it after her sister. that gives me ideas for when (and if) i have kids. i had an older sister, but never met her b/c she died of heart complications at only 2 days old. maybe i could name a baby girl after her (IF i have one.) :)

*~*~Evy~*~*

Good lord! I go away for a while and I come back you updated like mad! lol I liked the new chapters! yo0u have done a very good job..I wonder what is going to happen now...

i think you are getting WAY better with your writing skills...keep up the great work! *hugs*

_krillball6_

_Jessi_

i cant wait to see ardeth's reaction. and everyone else's. and evy's reaction when ardeth comes back. still goin' good!

this story is getting better all the time! and i think u should write the upcoming story...it sounds really good! im really into hauntings and stuff like that. like the movie The Grudge. plots like that are awesome. anywayz...i'd like to know that lady's story and see what all the bad reviews were for and if the story was really that bad (which i doubt!). could u plz email me her pen name and the title of her story. thanx!

*~*~Evy~*~*

Woohoo! New chapter! I LOVED it! Everyone got back together...well not Evy but you knwo what I mean. How are they gonna save her? I'm like on the edge of my sit!

Oh ya, I read the girl story...what is everyone talking about? I mean the story was ok, it didn't deserve all those flames...what is wrong with people these days..everyone is so angry...good lord!

Please update soon...you always do! Yay lol. Oh and the chapter was nice and long..thanks! I'm really enjoying the story so far! Woohoo..you rock!

_krillball6_

_Jessi_

another great one! keep 'em comin'!