are you going to write more to the story?

i hope you do because i want to see what happens with olivia elliote and kathleen, and i would like to see if kathleen straightens things out her dad!

I hope you update soon i'm hooked. lol :) good luck with your next chapter

i hope you continue soon i cant wait to see what is up with kathleen...

nikki

oh! muy bueno! muy bueno!

this is so good! please PLEASE keep this story up! its fantastic!

update soon!

oph! i'm loking forward to it! and shouldn't it be cross some t's and dot some i;d? i'm confused...

Bribles

aw poor Kat! Continue this!

Good job! This is amazing!

i love this story the relationship between liv and kat is great cant wait for more! ;)

This is getting better and better! I can't wait to find out what's going on with Elliot's family. PLEASE update soon!

I wish the writer's would write an peisode allowing Liv to smile and laugh! She doesn't do it enough for real! Great story!

love it

Pelase continue soon! i cna't wiat to rad the rest of the stor! what did Kathleen see?

BL

I wish I could read more, but I have to get to class! (It's across campus and starts in like 10 minutes...oops) :) That just shows how into your story I've become - I couldn't pull my eyes off of it :) I'll have to be honest...I was about to skip over your story at first solely because of the summery. This sounds stupid of me...but you wrote, "Olivia and Elliot must decide who done it and why". I know what your trying to say...but "who done it" isn't really correct english. What you might want to put might be: Olivia and Elliot must decide who did it and why". I'm not trying to be all "grammer woman" or anything...but the grammer in your summary almost led me to not reading the beautiful story you've written inside! I was afraid that it was going to be a story with awful grammer and such...but you've done an EXCELLENT job. This story line seems new and intreging and I can't wait to read what's coming up next. One thing I thought was funny where the names you picked out for the murdered couples :) When you said Greg and Marsha...I automatically think of the Brady Bunch :) - and with Jack and Janet...I think of Jack and Jill for some crazy reason,ha. Then with Janet Johnson...I thoguht I'd read Janet Jackson. I can't help but wonder if this was done for a reason that we'll later find out in the story, or if I'm just really weird - (probably the later) ;) Anyways, love your story and I'm putting it up on my author alert list! Update soon!

I like it, continue it.