Your story is really good I think you should keep it, It is the best Fable fic I've ever read you need to update though. Speaking of your story I have one of my own. It has the same name of yours, though mine is a Harry Potter, but your story has inspired me to write a Fable one as well. Not right now though, I am going to reread your story:)

BYE, Lunaluver2293

Great id like to see more keep writing great so far KUI

Excellent please update soon

please continue the story

wow thats great! even though i've beatthe game laods of times i love reading this novelization! you should keep going! this could get good...

Please continue this story is freakin awesome man please continue

This is great. Keep up the good work

oh...perhaps my last comment was wrong. Is Scarlet Robe not the Heros mother in this?

So far, I'm liking it, but there has been one error: you wrote at the beginning of chapter one that 14 years had passed since Micheal and Theresa'a mother 'died' and that Theresa was now 12. Since Micheal is younger than Theresa, and the balverine attack happened two years before her birth...well, it just doesn't fit. Other than that, though, it is really good.

Very well written, Keep up the good work.

AWESOME!... yeah... hope the next chapter comes out soon... right-o...

Nice novelization. I kinda like how you started the story with the hero's mother, Scarlet, instead of the dream he had. I might just keep reading this.

Anyway, if you have the chance, read my story, A Hero's Legacy! It's the first Fable story ever finished, and I would like it if you read it.

Cool story. I like how you started with Scarlet and not where the game started out. I'll definately keep reading this story. If you get the chance, take a look at mine as well. Thanxers.

shorter but just as good. your doing very good with fight scences as well. update soon

Well this is a very good story. The chapters are fairly long and you dont go on and on and on. And on. well you get the point. Other then a couple of typos like for example 'Rosie, humming happily, went back inside'. I personally had no idea that teddy bears could hum.

Anyways I was hoping you could use my oc in later chapters.

Info:

name- Achilles Roberts (a-kill-es)

age- 2 months older then Michael Thatcher

apperance- blond spicky hair,green eyes,tan, fairly muscular, and has his Fathers armour (tan,and made of a secret type of metal)

Family- Mother and Father/deceased, brother/deceased

main weapon- 2 double edged swords

secondary weapons- Bow aand Arrow

Main will power- Fire

birthplace- knothole glade

bio- i'll send it to you on email.