Reviews for Murder, My Suite
Maeph93 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
summary sounds cool. the story: needs work. First of all, why is this in play script format. And even if it were, don't you think it would be a bit more descriptive?
Guest chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
I loved this story
ChiChi993 chapter 4 . 8/27/2007
I'm lovin ur story its awesome i love mysteries like this...u were paying tribute to the famous writer agatha chrisite using hercules poirot as the detective. . . . .great greta story
sn4ilkit-archive chapter 4 . 7/15/2007
Sherlock Holmes!

"Belgian, mon cap-i-tan."

"Elementary, my dear Watson"

CodySherlock

ZackWatson
Jordan chapter 7 . 6/30/2007
amazing story line, I was laughing the whole time reading,

They should make this into an actual episode
lXxleternitylxXl chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Great story!D I enjoyed it.
Solitaire's Mornie chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
It's a promising beginning, not something I usually read, but you should know doesn't allow the script format. If you don't change it, someone might repirt this fic and you risk it being deleted and your account being banned for 3 days minimum.
In NYC chapter 7 . 5/22/2006
That was a wonderful fic! Reading the previous reviews seems to me that all has been said.

Congratulations, the humor and suspense were great and all the characters were right in place.
RockDiva chapter 7 . 5/9/2006
Okay so I'm like months and months behind on this, but I still wanted to review. Firts as a huge fan of "It's A Mad Mad Mad Hotel"- I've probably seen it more times than any 18 year old should-the expertiese behind your story makes it one that I could bookmark and read several times over.

It's obvious that you are an excellent writer and know what you're dealing with. The mixture of suspense and humor was just right. And being a huge fan of all the mobster movies, I found the parodies delightfully refreshing. I especially enjoyed the Maltese Falcon spew.

What I enjoyed the best is how the writing was sophisticated and silly all at the same time. You were writing for a younger audience, but you didn't compromise the story by automatically assuming that your storyline would fly over most heads. Also, loved how Chels got the spotlight at the end. I'm a girl, so I don't think of her as "hot", but she is by far one of my favorite Disney Channel characters.

All-in-All, I loved this story so much that if I knew it wasn't rude to beg, I'd beg for you to continue a Moseby P.I. series!

Thanks for sharing with us your creative genius-and my apologies for this novel of a review!
Suspension chapter 7 . 3/22/2006
That was such a breath of fresh air. I really enjoyed your story very much. It was so clever, thank you for writing it :)
sol invictus chapter 7 . 3/14/2006
I don't know how I missed this for so long, but I have to say that your story is by far one of the best pieces of work I've ever read on this site. Congratulations!
BronzeRavenRavenclaw chapter 7 . 1/20/2006
It's a really good story, I've never read anything like it, it's a msytery fic, and it's really funny at the same time, and I barely enjoy reading mystery fics. Anyways, Raven's last few parts had to be the funniest, you still used her normal lines such as "Ya Nasties", and Chelsea's ability to solve cases after the Ms. Applebottom mystery.
golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 7 . 1/8/2006
This is one of the best stories I've read. They should make an episode of this. It'd be quite popular, epecially with me. You should make a sequel! :P
Dragon of Venus chapter 7 . 12/21/2005
this is a teriffic fic. you should send it to disney channel, it'd make a great episode!

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DragonskinFool chapter 7 . 12/6/2005
One of the best stories I've read. it was so funny. I love the ending. Can't wait to see if there's a sequel
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