| Reviews for Excuse Me |
|---|
OwSw chapter 6 . 8/8/2017 I absolutely loved the plot line, but I'm wondering.. is there going to be an update? this year? soon? please, with a cherry on top !puppy eyes! |
jarjayes chapter 6 . 1/2/2016 WOW! This is actually very good! But I see you haven't updated in FOREVER! This is very good! Kaiba's mean...he really is. And Kaiba has to get her out the house. I wonder what he will do to achieve that? |
jarjayes chapter 5 . 1/2/2016 I get inspired by other writers myself. I'm writing a Seto/Anzu fic presently and I've been reading all this lately for inspiration and such. I've gotta stop eventually and just get to it. People, never run into a burning building! |
jarjayes chapter 4 . 1/2/2016 The CURSE OF THE FALLEN BAGEL...LOL! |
jarjayes chapter 3 . 1/2/2016 Another dream? Must've been that bagel...that's why people shouldn't eat off the floor? |
jarjayes chapter 2 . 1/2/2016 The side-effects of dropping your bagel on the floor to pick it up an eat it: lustful dreams... in Kaiba's case, it must have been caused by the slap to his face that probably smacked his pent up sex hormones loose. The scene with the bagel was funny...it was really hilarious! But tell me, ain't it a bit too early to have anyone drooling over anyone? Or could this be due to the air conditioning not working right? Or the bagel laced with rat poison? And the extra large mug of coffee? Many question. Many theories. |
jarjayes chapter 1 . 1/2/2016 GULP! Although, I did love the scene where Anzu slapped Kaiba I have to say that that wasn't reason enough to do it. Just because he called her ugly? I see where this is going though. But still, not enough reason to slap the guy. He deserves it but not enough reason. It just shows that she has too much of a short fuse and that she's still immature. Um, loved the scene where he's nitpicking at her resume to find even spelling errors to it so that he can have enough reason not to give her an interview. That was funny. |
Bockibear chapter 6 . 2/13/2014 Love this story! Please update! |
xFlipJamsx chapter 6 . 10/15/2013 Please update |
mangafn chapter 6 . 6/19/2011 wowww it's such a nice story. WILL YPU UPDATE? |
5123 chapter 6 . 12/21/2009 love it more please! |
tia smith chapter 6 . 4/4/2009 come on update soon |
Suspicious Soup chapter 6 . 10/6/2008 Cook? I'm surprised she won't burn up the kaiba mansion. I liked the ending of chapter 4. It just all falls into place. There were only a few grammatical problems that I am sure you can fix seeing as they are quite nminor. Right now you probably thinking I''m someone who like to criticize but no. I like to look at the positive side of stories and this is definitely going to my favorites list. Thankyou for writing something so entertaining and at the same time appropriate. -Severine |
AmQaudrus chapter 6 . 3/23/2008 This is sweet ! :D love it , you should really continue ! X3 ! One for my favorites ! :D |
Gaignun Girl chapter 6 . 8/3/2007 This story is so..Kawaii! Please update soon! Dying to read here! ] |