I knew he liked him

I knew he liked him

Misaka: Warren jealous ~~*smirk*- by the way this story is cute and awesome. Right Jess?
Jess: Yeah.
Elisa: Misaka only boy who love slash a.k.a Yaoi *smile*
Misaka: Yup! And this story part of it.
Nikka : Update please! Please!

This is a very interesting plot. PLease continue if the story hasn't been put on hiatus. The Commander busting into the bar would be a good idea.

keep it going

nice work

Whazzup? I'm not gonna login cause I'm a loser. xP Anyways, I love this story and I love Warren/Will slash. But you know what's funny? The summary says SLASH and states the pairing and yet people still flame it. If they took the time to read the story and then bash it because of the pairing, they obviously have no lives. - So ignore them and CONTINUE THIS! Please.

Cool I love this more please

Lets see, the chapters are really quite short. Did you know you could have your story deleted if you have a chapter of entirey author notes? So I'd suggest deleting 'chapters' Hello/My Dear Readers. You'll also want to make the chapters longer- I suggest putting 3,4,5 together, and 5 & 6, so it adds up to 3/4 chapters, take some betas- and not the ones who are fans and say 'this is good, but something is missing' and won't tell you what. Good luck.

I glanced at chapter two, and did something I normally don't -read your reviews. This 'review' is just to reply to them, when I'm done reading this fic, I'll put my own review up. Firstly 'Anna', you're a coward- if you've got an 'opinion', use your account so people can tell you thier opinions of your comments - if your too afraid to put your name up here and risk flames for your fics- don't review. Personally, because your 'review' was so pointless, I'd delete it. For 'Hannah', if you have a 'negative bias toward Will/Warren' it will always play in- simple solution, don't read it. Yes, it is 'just your opinion' and you are more then welcome to it- that doesn't mean the rest of us give a damn about it either. Anyone else notice that 'Hannah' responded to 'Anna' very well, and that, perhapes, since 'Hannah' responded to the authors comments to 'Anna' they may very well be one in the same? 'Lord of the Onion Rings' you lack imagination if you can't see them acting any diffrent then they were in the movie, people change, grow, even in the movies. I've read much more (some might say 'worse') OOC fics, and I enjoy them. 'Derager', you're not any better then the others for putting up a fake account just to bash slash fans and the people who write it- in fact it makes you all that much more worse. People like them make me sick, no respect- not even for themselves.

I really liked this. I thought Warren was a bit OOC, but that can easily be fixed.

Anna, you're an idiot. Plain and simple. The point of reviews is to offer constructive critisizm, and nothing you wrote was constructive. You have a lot of growing up to do.

Hey, I really like this so far! I hope you update soon!

-Sunstar D

aw, sweet waren got jealous, more please

Please update soon, don't keep us waiting. I like the way you do Layla, I never quite believed Layla's character in the movie, no one is that 'nice' unless they lace their drinks with Valium(_)

Don't let all the icky-flamers get you down! You are creative enough to have a whole different view on the characters and I think that should be praised. *Praises* Go You! Anyway, I liked the story, not exactly one of my top tens but really good. Keep at it!

~*~Tasha~*~

PS:Thanks to your writing I'm buying pants similar to those mentioned in Chapter 3 or 4...somewhere around there. -