Reviews for Beginnings
Misura chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
An enjoyable and engaging read, in which I especially adored your portrayal and descriptions of Lykouleon, who just made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. _
The Sailor Earth chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
I love this story. Quite honestly I love all your Dragon Knights sstories. I think a sequel is in order. You could tell us how Kai-stern became the Blue Dragon Officer, something I've always wanted to know that Mineko Ohkami has deprived us of. So please a sequel.

Sailor Earth
Plural Force chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Very nice... Animegoil is right, this story was just begging to be written, and you pulled it off perfectly. I really like this, and would love for it to be turned into a series. D Keep up the good work!

Hobey-ho,

Peophin-chan
Subo-chan chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
FWEH! THAT WAS SO COOL! lykouleon is so cool, and the way you worte this story, made him more cute! XD lyl!

Subo-chan
Subo-chan chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
FWEH! THAT WAS SO COOL! lykouleon is so cool, and the way you worte this story, made him more cute! XD lyl!

Subo-chan
Animegoil chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Ah *glomp* how cute! Funny how we make the cheerful characters like Kaistern be... not all the cheerful in the first place. We tint them darker.

How cool! I loved how you did this, very original, and I was wondering when someone would do a fic with Kaistern and Lykouleon meeting/traveling together. Then again, I don't check the fandom all that much, so maybe it is there... but the story was just one taht was begging to be written.

Lykouleon's descriptions are so... interesting. We have his wonderful, warm, benevolent personality that makes us think he's perfect, and then we have the part that makes him human, he's humble and doens't know many languages *laugh* Very interesting.

Another thing I thought was curious was Kaistern's hiding of his hair and eyes. I guess they are rare, and I _think_ you've written something that had stuff on how Kaistern was different looking from most humans or something... *can't quite remember* But I thought that was interesting that he felt he had to hide it. I'd never thought of that...

I liked the prose, and though usually I prefer prose with dialogue, cause otherwise I find it boring, this was pretty good. Definitely didn't bore me, it kinda leads one to see what's going to be said next, what little detail is going to be dropped next about the characters, and the 'dialogue' was done naturally enough that I didn't realize it wasn't realy dialoguq but prose of the dialogue until ... *thinks* Oh yes, til I noticed there wasn't a quotation mark at the end of the paragraph. Lol.

sorry for the long review, I know I just talk a lot about nothing *sweatdrop* Just know that I liked it. You always delve into the characters a little differently each time, and pose a darker side to things, while always (usually?) having a happy ending. _ Tata!