wow- this was relaly really beautiful! i enjoyed it very much! hot and sweet- wonderfully descriptive! kuddos!

There was something very tender and sweet about this that I adored. The voice you gave Hephaistion was absolutely beautiful. The writing was excellent.

WAii You made me this is a very happy story that made me feel good - thank you because I'm kinda in a LOT of pain right now and needed this.

I think that this sort of writing is (heh) BEAUTIFUL.

Aww...omg...so amazing. Love it! Is there going be any more!

YEAH! Stories like this make me happy, even with my eye hurting like a bitch, the way it does now. Yeah sex! I agree-if I ran the movie, things would've been much different. Fun stuff, fun stuff! Great job!

That was well written, you should continue it.

Aww! *grins lecherously* If you were in charge of the film... it would have been way better! Heh, very good!

Oh this was so sweet and hot! It's a good thing I checked again, you're not posting on lj anymore?

Great! Beautiful!

That was beautiful, simply beautiful...

The way you described Hephaistion's feeling and their intimate moments were really well done!

This was really great! Well done!