| Reviews for Not Moving |
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Falcon Horus chapter 1 . 12/7/2005 Yes, exactly that scene in Out of Gas... |
Offending Shadow chapter 1 . 8/25/2005 I think you could have gotten away with drawing this out a lot more. Nice concept, and it started well, but her switch into normal thought was very abrupt. There didn't seem to be any real trigger. |