Pls update soon...

I'm sorry it has taken me so long to read this new chapter. My life has just been really out of order.

Anyway, I'm trying my hardest to remember what happened before in the story, but it's been such a long time between this update and the last one that I can't remember. I'm sure, though, that I'll catch on quickly again if you keep updating regularly.

Despite all that, I found this new chapter interesting and entertaining to read. And your writing is still as good as ever. I was really feeling sorry for Carita at the end, when Malee was being so harsh. Although, I'm not sure if she was really that harsh... You just write in a way that it makes it really easy to relate to the character's situation and feelings. Considering that, you might want to be careful with how strongly you portray the emotions of different characters so you don't emphasize them too much.

I really hope you're going to keep updating your stories more often now. _

Lovely chapter. I love you. You are an extraordinary writer. You won't believe the amount of time i spent thinking on what would happen next. Another talk with the boy behind the fence coming up? Update soon

zak

Plzzz plzzz can u update. Y did u stop? Its rathr lyk readin deadra's account which endd sdnly. Plz ryt again.

hope you update this story soon

Oh mi gosh! I can't believe it! Continue updating. Quick! Oh mi gosh! Kaithiel and Caritalina! AH!EK!

HU!Update!

update soon!

i luv your story oh so much and i was laughing at the last sentence when she was shocked, for some reason i like the little '?' thing. i'm hoping you could update your story 8begging on knees*

I love your story!

I love your story!

I love your story!

I love your story!

I love your story!

I love your story!

I love your story!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :]

I love this story so far. Plz update soon.

Whoa...this chapter is so getting in trouble for(my mom is yelling at me to get off and blah blah blah) Man oh man...like, this chapter was excellent! I was into it. This may sound corny-ish but I felt like I could see what Carita was seeing, and not only that i was getting completely pissed at what happened. How stupid people were! How could they do that? People in the old OLD days were messed up! Ah...this was the best chapter so far! Oh my...as soo as i saw Kaithiel my eyes instantly saw Kai and my jaw dropped. I was like 'NO WAY!'...and then my cat stared at me like i was crazy. Man...you're awesome. lol. I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Hm...I wonder what's going to happen between Carita and Kai...I mean...he wasn't all that pleased with what she said...Hm... so many possibilites! Well! Please hurry with the 7th chapter! I must know what happens, or i'll cry.

-Sanura

Hey Dear

Very very well done dear, liked it a lot! You know your characters well, vividly described and emotional retelling of the past.

I hope Jonathon gets what's coming to him, as it must be very hurting for Carita to see what her ancestors went through like that. At least he was ignorant enough not to make sure the oracle was burned properly, as if he could get rid of it that easily anyway!

Wow, so both Kai and Carita had past lives then? Wonder what parallels will be drawn between past and present? I look forward to finding out more! Talk soon dear.

Love SGCred x x x

awesome! Update soon

Wow. I have no words to reveal to you about this chapter. But, all I can say is that, yes, it is extremely shocking. All the realizations hit her like a thousand pounds of rocks. As so it did to me. Update soon when you can.

awesome update on ur story wait till the next update.