I remember you from way back on the YTDAW site (I was "Sara Grissom" on that board) but somehow I never read this story until today. Having recently begun revisiting my love for the good GSR, I've been both reading and writing Grissom and Sara fanfiction again.

I spent nearly my entire day off from work thoroughly absorbed in your story. It's fun to go back in time to the earlier, lighter years of Grissom and Sara (before the show's writers completely screwed them all up) and imagine the different paths their lives may have gone. I especially enjoyed seeing Grissom have to compete with other guys for Sara's attention.

I love your writing skill. You give such depth and life to your stories while still keeping everyone in-character that I can easily picture in my mind every detail unfolding as clearly as if I was watching it on TV like a movie, and not just reading it off a screen.

Thanks for writing, and thanks for sharing.

keep up the good word .We hope to read some of your wonderfull story . it had all you what in story .when we read we had read to the end .

nice story..

LOVE this fic

That was awesome! And yes, it could have been longer but it's finished and it was still a fabulous tale. Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. One of my favs.

What a story. You really put the new CSI writing team to shame. My friend kept on telling me that I should read this and I did. I am glad I did. A precious story like this just made my day. Thank you.

A great story with a sparkling ending. I cannot stop smiling and cannot get over how brilliantly the story you have here. Perfect, just perfect. Lucky Grissom. He wouldn't need to sing "it's a lesson too late for the learning..."

Thanks for not giving up on this one and for coming back to give your readers a final chapter regardless the lengthy break between the final two chapters.

Marie was right. This truly is a gem to be cherished for the ages.

Ahhhh-a perfect ending! No need for more chapters-little Billy will learn to love his new neighbor as much as he loves Sara! And Dan-well, maybe he'll get Stephanie?!

You really write Grissom well-write some more GSR! I hate what CSI writers did to Sara and GSR in season 13-not sure I'll watch season 14.

Thank you for writing such a beautiful love story!

OH THIS IS SO GREAT! I am shouting! :)
Love Grissom fighting over Sara! And I knew what she would do!
I hate to see there is only one more chapter!
Yes, as life allows, you should write more-maybe short stories?

Loving every chapter-and I want you to know that! You should write again-but how on earth can you remember your story over-what? 6 years? LOL!
LOVE Grissom remembering his women!
Now-At least I don't have to wait to find out who is with Sara! On to the next...

Ahhhh-Another beautiful chapter! You should be a 'real' writer-maybe a poet?! You've done a wonderful job of putting Sara and Grissom into a believable future! Bed now-finish tomorrow! Can't believe I never found you before today!

A little competition for dear ole Gil! Maybe get him moving in the Sara direction! Great chapter, descriptions are beautiful!

What a perfect Grissom you have written!

What started out as a nice calm day pretty quickly turned into a sneak peek at hot smut! LOL!

I love your descriptions-I know what Sara's house looks like! Interesting that you put Sara on the east coast-and you sent her to central America! WOW! And realized you started this one in '05! Now, I'm thinking you 'out-thought' the writers with your creativity! Loving this!