| Reviews for Doll |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 The sad thing here is that this girl probably got lucky with her owner. Compared to some of the horror stories that most of the other slaves go through in the Wheel of Time her fate almost seems pleasant. Or as pleasant as it can be under the circumstances. |
| Someone chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 It seems to me that Lili is as sane as a damane can manage. She isn't broken yet and probably won't break for a long time. If she were to be freed she would adapt fairly quickly. So one can find a hopeful silverline in this nice sad fic. |
 Bob G. Leeman chapter 1 . 7/15/2011 being a damane sucks even more than being ME! you have a singular skill for writing poetic prose without losing sight of the fact that you are telling a story. I have just read half the tales on this site & am feeling a bit dazed... yours are the best I have seen so far. write more! please. Elaida, maybe? |
| zebrasdancing chapter 1 . 6/17/2009 interesting |
| Amyrlin Egwene chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 I think little Lili is slightly insane. But who wouldn't be? For someone who isn't native to Seanchan, this is probably the only way to survive. |
| Lyssa chapter 1 . 2/15/2008 apt. |
| Lady Whimsy chapter 1 . 8/15/2007 Your story is enteresting. I've often wondered if damane think to themselves in the first person. I guess it depends. Great job. |
| Mask1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2007 Two words only Darkly Fitting. Mask |
| Min Daae chapter 1 . 11/24/2006 The return review... Yes, this is good! I am impressed. I don't really hate the Seanchan, just think they are a bit...misguided? Aw heck, the sul'dam/damane thing is icky. Very nice, dear. *applause* |
| Sear chapter 1 . 10/15/2006 Oh my god, that is so good and so disturbing. /C. Fale |
| SheWasFlying chapter 1 . 10/9/2006 Wow. That was... wow. Great job! Its going on my favs for sure. Poor damane women. I always want to cry when I read parts with damane in it. Stupid Seanchen! lol, anyway, it was great. ~Ani - |
| blue demon160 chapter 1 . 3/1/2006 loved it! Gives great insight into a damanes thoughts and inner most feelings. Wonderful piece of work! |
| Eto svodit s uma chapter 1 . 12/21/2005 That was very weird. I don't get it. |
| free2thamax chapter 1 . 11/14/2005 Aw, that was so sad. I loved it, though. ;) It really showed the hopelessness and helplessness of a damane. That was so emotional without being sappy, sad without being overdone. Keep it up! |
| MuddyAstronaut chapter 1 . 9/19/2005 That was absolutely great! It was really well written with some great insight into how a mainland caught Damane might feel. I really enjoyed reading it. Hope to see more stories from you soon! |
