That was enjoyable to read. Very good!

You have given us an interesting look with this.

Lancelot wanting out, willing to risk desertion. His pain, his frustration I could see this well.

And I like how being in Arthur's unit has made him a better man. Be it more human or better in battle, I think both. It's good to see him not choose the dark side. For I see Arthur in such a light.

And for you to hint at the end... Make me wonder at what else Arthur has offered him.