loved it

I love this style of writing. Thank you for writing this story.

Great!

Aww, this sad. And sweet at the same time. I liked L's pondering on emotions, and how they affect him. And the ending is brilliant!

Aww!

Aw! Poor L. I was so sad when he was killed

Oh, that makes me sad and happy all at once. The last line was a lovely end. I know it's been forever and a day, but would you consider writing more Death Note? Maybe a piece for Raito similar to this one?

one of the few LxLight fics that manages keep L in character.

very nicely written. :]

First lxlight story that I've been moved by. I love the way L has such conflicting emotions and tries but fails to surpress them. Good job! Please write more.

You might want to write a second chapter. Or I might have to strangle you. . all in good cheer, of course.

See! I knew it all along!

i always thought that L wasn't putting his full effort into the Kira case just because he didn't actually want to catch Raito.

Must be cause Raito's so hot.

Well, he is. really. flippin'. hot.

mmk. g'job. good fic.

cute. really, really cute. and sad. really, really sad. bittersweet.

Wait, wait, this beautiful little monologue ISN'T a one-shot, is it? Because that's a horrible place to stop it!

_ Just thought I'd offer up my two-cents and beg for more.

'Til next time then, since this ISN'T a one shot.

-Kloudy Reignfall

ah! the clifhangers! i want more *Sigh* this is so good, the way you explore the mind of L *hugs* i love theses fanfictions

ooh! I love the end, makes me want a sequeal...