| Reviews for Within The Darkness |
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   jowilleatyuh chapter 21 . 5/16/2012 I loved this... I really do- Is there more? I'm awfully curious on how this ends... |
| jowilleatyuh chapter 18 . 5/16/2012 ._. Wait what? WOW MYSTERIOUS BOYYYYYYY! Is he her brother? :3 |
| jowilleatyuh chapter 3 . 5/15/2012 I love the persistence... very curious on the reasoning though (: This leaves me at a good cliff hanger until tomorrow xD But I am very interested... *shrugs* |
| Lady Anck-su-namun chapter 21 . 12/1/2007 Great chapter! Sorry to took so long to review - i really love this story! |
| Lily Evans Potter Star chapter 2 . 10/23/2006 Yay for the mauraders! Go James! Go James! ~Lily |
| Lily Evans Potter Star chapter 1 . 10/23/2006 Wow that was really really good. Not Mary-Sue at all! I can't wait to read the rest! ~Lily |
| Lady Anck-su-namun chapter 20 . 10/2/2006 Great job! I'm in a romance mood too lol! Now I just need to get a boyfriend...lol! Great chapter! |
| ThePranksterQueens chapter 19 . 8/12/2006 this was great (beacause it's been so long since you updated) and i really hope you update soon! that courtyard sounded so romantic... |
| Lady Anck-su-namun chapter 19 . 8/12/2006 Of course you still have reviewers left! I love this story! This chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy - gotta love that fluff! Update soon! |
| ThePranksterQueens chapter 18 . 7/13/2006 my god, how many guys are interested in her? this is really good, and i hope you update soon! |
| GypsyFallenAngelz chapter 18 . 5/31/2006 wow that was a great chapter, i dont like this random person ravenclaw...hm i cant wait for the next chapter :D Emma Riddle |
| HPfanatic592 chapter 18 . 5/25/2006 First, this story really is great, even if it's a little common, it's not stereotypical. Second, you really need to check your grammar. There are tons of tense errors, is English your second language? (not meaning to be rude). I don't know if you realize that you say 'will' when you mean 'well'. I don't know if you mean to do that or what, but it's not very professional. But besides a few too many grammatical and spelling errors, you have a good story here. -Megan |
| ourlittlesecret7 chapter 18 . 5/24/2006 i like this so much! i think mariana's a really cool character, i'd totally want to be friends with her! :-D please update soon! *Skye |
| Lady Anck-su-namun chapter 18 . 5/24/2006 Great chapter - it was really sweet! |
| Lilybet Edyvean chapter 1 . 5/24/2006 Tip: Don't switch between tenses. |
