Is 11 1/2 years an eternity?

'Cause, man, it feels like it...

Hmm...sounds like Dr. D needs to meet up with the burning end of my scimitar. MADNESS sounds like something I'd rather never been discovered.

Keep the chapters coming.

Wow! They drifted apart because of her stubberness? Gee, seems Kim learned the hardway regarding the tactical sound-advice of 'retreating to fight another day'. Ron knew it thus why he was promoted over her, and all of this torn them apart. Kim bedding Nick was not a good idea either to try to patch things up with Ron.

This is definitely shaping to be an very great dramatic KP story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

pretty cool... that mistery of nicholas and kim mhm..

keep it up

Hey Slayerwolf!

I liked the description for what MADDNESS was-interesting twist. I also like how you described the details with Drakken's *cough cough* scarred face.

WOO! I enjoyed Shego's story! You did such a good job of it!

Also, the characters that you have in the story; Nick and Leon and Daniel, are intriguing too-I hope to see a tad more development on their parts...

Keep up what you have for everyone else of course!

(Can't wait to see what Shego and Kim bicker over first!)

Great chapter! Update!

So Hunt is already starting to show he's a jerk. I like Steele, & especially Yuri—a woman of few words who can kick butt is always good. Update soon please.

Very good story so far. I don't know how this Nick guy got between our favorite couple, but I'm betting he'll be revealed as a snake & die a messy death in good time. I like Shego in this story a lot.

Update soon please.

Awesome story Slayerwolf. I'd have to say you have made this extremely creative out of what had been given to you. (Although I still have my own idea's which keep evolving into a clearer path as I read your story-but I promise I'm not stealing anything of yours. I would never denigrate such a great story. (Well, I may "borrow" a gun of course, else I have to do some massive research on the subject before I can write anything...))

I love all the twists in your story-it keeps it fresh, which is so nice because I can usually predict what will happen a few sentences into a story. Thanks for jerking my predictions up-side-down, eh?

I sincerely hope that you update this soon; though I dare say I can truly compete with such calibur.

Interesting twist bringing the Be-Be's into the story. (Just wish I knew what "Wasps" were...guess I'll find out in the next chapter.)

Shiz, all the gun jargon-I don't think I can keep up with you on that! If it looks like a boom-boom-stick, sounds like one, tastes like one (?), then it's a gun to me!

And that line where Shego was being completely sarcastic with the "o, ah, can we just skip all that?" had me rolling on the floor, really!

Heh, I also recruited myself to writing a fic based on childlike-ghost's pics, but how am I supposed to compete with you? I don't know if I should surrender now or still give it a shot!

Well written thus far! (I'm almost afraid to continue reading lest all my own idea's be trampled out by this brillaint star of a piece!) I will surely have to continue reading this nonetheless!

Damn I love a good op. Great writing style and the story moves well. Looking forward to the next chap.

What? Huh? i am so lost...

lots of tech talk. i will hit you up if i ever use that in my stories. nice.

THANKS!

Ohh come on be nice. keep writing, please

Oh, definitely getting interesting. I'm really wondering why Shego isn't working with Drakken though, should be interesting to get the details on that!

Exciting! After high school and recruited into the CIA. Good build up to action. Looking forward to read more.