I really liked it. You're writing style is really smooth:)

I just had to tell you, after I read this I wished the movie had ended this way. It makes more sense to me than Sebastian falling in love with Annette so soon, and out of love with Kathryn -the person who really knows him. Very well done! I hope you write more!

I loved it.

hey.I liked the chapter.I like how you wrote it.I like how Kathryn was vulnerable but not over the top.

Sexual scenes don't bother me but they aren't , some things are left unsaid.

Something I just want to tell you(its not meant to offend you): It wouldn't necesarily mean that you're an ordinary writer if you had ordinary doesn't have to do with that.

Some people have certain writing style, they want to convey a certain grow as they write more, so they aren't ordinary, they're in-the-process-writers just like you are.

This is hauntingly beautiful and it lingers in your mind for days afterward. When I first read this I reread the part where Sebastian read his journal to Kathryn at least a dozen times. It nearly made me cry.

I think it's perfect without the love scene, and let's the reader focus on the dynamics between k/s. I loved the last paragraph of the first paragraph, especially the first sentence of that paragraph.

And I think I might have loved your story too much; I just knew I got that shirt ripping thing from some author. :) What can I say? You're inspiring. I hope you write more.

I loved what Sebastian wrote in his journal. Great story. ;-)

I liked it very much. You left it in a good place, trust me I know. Can't wait to read the other story you have planned.

I really like this story. I love the way you portray the relationship between Kathryn and Sebastian. Can't wait for the next chapter! Just wanted you to know that there are still people out there reading CI fiction!

gosh! that was so beautiful! no cliche, never! i so did love the ending with "rules are meant to be broken". your short fic made fall in love with k/s all over again! :wub: please do write more k/s fics!

i like it update

it wasnt a bad idea and it was pretty well written.. cant wait for the next installment

i liked it it was an excellent start i cant wait for the nest chapter!

omg i love this story i cant wait for the next part i love cruel intentions fiction you whould write more and maybe try a sex scene cos it wasnt bad so far , i tried to make a fic but it sucked cos im no writer lol oh well. anyway great fic please update soon

I like the story so far. I can't wait for an update. Keep it coming.

hey. very nice job with the story. i thought that the kathryn-sebastian interaction was really realistic, and very true to their characters.

lol i actually read this story a few days ago, but i forgot to review. then i was thinking about how happy i am when my stories get reviews, and i figured i'd spread the joy, because.. well, because you deserve it! haha

can't wait for part two