OH COME ON!

It was such a great story until then end. Right then and there, and... BOOM! You just dropped a bomb! How could you do that? You couldn't have settled for something at least mildly happy? How is Misty supposed to live with herself knowing that as soon as she let another person back into her life, they die? Everything else except the ending I loved. The ending was good, it's just not the one I wanted.

... I hate you. YOU COULDN'T HAVE MADE IT A HAPPY ENDING, COULD YOU?! Thanks for nothing!

Are maybe misty killed Brock and ash. She did say like I hurt Brock.

Shitty ending/10

Seriously you had to end it like that? *sigh* I am disappoint

WOAH! Poor Misty! First she blames herself for the death of Brock, and then Ash dies! Your mean lol

Don't bother replying. Wow. That's sad. Poor Brock. Does stuff like that happen in America? Well, very good chapter.

WTF happened to Brock? Is he dead? Has he moved? Please reply to

Well, they're with Brock. As soon as I read the announcement, I was just...They're friends forever, now.

Ack! I'm crying three chapters into the story! Heheh. Good job. :)

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Wow...a very sad ending. Good job I guess...

This was a very sad story indeed...

Hmm...I surprised on how emotional this story is so far...

Good job on this chapter.

Oh. Wow.

That twist at the end was the best! I totally did NOT expect that at all! Wow! That was ... (this sounds awful) awesome.

To tell you the truth, this story was REALLY emotional. I mean, it seems like you bottled up the feelings of fifty emo teens and dumped them all over this fic. It was good. Really good.

This story made me laugh. NOT LIKE IN A BAD WAY! Oh goodness I sound messed up now; I meant in the happy parts! I swear, not at the deaths. I laughed at the end, though, mostly at myself, because you REALLY got me there. I didn't expect that ending at all. Whew!

Well, Misty's gonna be suicidal now. Or she can marry Gary. Either or.

Anyways, thanks for writing this! And I'm sorry for sounding so messed up . . . -_-"

Finessefully,

X

I'll review the rest, but I must say:

Misty never liked water that much

Oddest sentence I ever read. I don't mean that in a bad way. :D

Finessefully,

X

Omfg amazing! So well written. The ending... Omg. Poor Misty. This is one of the best stories and saddest stories I've read. And Misty survived...alone. The symbolism and message was really good... I mean if there is one and I think there is. The way you ended it made sense in a weird way. K I don't even know what I'm trying to say anymore lol but GREAT STORY!