You have a very intense story here, luv, and one that has a lot of merit. Your characters had their places and your dialogue seemed to fit well with how you portrayed people.

You seemed to have a little trouble with tenses, however. There are a couple of places where you use present tense instead of past. If it was incidental, I apologize, but it still doesn't work.

The distinctions between the past and present are a little hazy for me. Does Giles' plane ride count as past or present? If it's present, make sure you help your reader make the jump from what happened with Glory to what happens on the plane.

A simple way to accomplish that can be through italics or making your script bold for one and normal for the other.

It was just those two faults that made the story a bit hard to follow, but apart from that it was quite well done.

i love this. it's so beautiful.

i must admit i always had worried that giles was on his own and now i can just pretend that he was with ethan

xAlaina

Kinda depressing, but still, aw. I love Ethan and Giles together. Havent found a new one in like...a long time. I love the last line:)

BTW - Platoons an awsome movie:)Johnny Depp has like, a tiny part, but it doesnt hurt:)

Iliked your fic