LOVE the story!Please do continue for it cannot be left as a one shot!XP XD XD XD

Extremely riveting, though I've no idea what you are talking about.

so interesting! please update ASAP! i want to read more of it! _

The tie bit, ROFL! Color blind? ROFLROLF!

This is so out of character, and yet it works beautifully.

Do you happen to watch Cowboy Bebop? Well, this fic seemed like a scene in it, only much better. Just wish it wasn't a one-shot. _

*Splutters* What, but, you...ARGH! This was such a good chapter too! And its only a one-shot? So many unanswered questions already! So much tension!

This story was really good, it has alot of potential!please continue it!

I loved it! I wish you would write more, it had so much potential. _

I absolutely LOVED it! Its just got class written all over it! Good job! Too bad its only a one-shot! i wish you could continue it, it looks like a very interesting and complicated intro. Reminded me very much of those intriguing black and white movies. Great work! Hope to read more!

Great one shot, definately different to any otheras I've read (in a good way) I wish there was more...

Hmm, this is different then what I'm used to seeing from you, but in a good way. Excellent as always!

Aw, so much potential T_T. Arwell, loved it despite the fact it's a one-shot. )

i liked it... a full review, if you continue!

very nicely done

impressive... love it )