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Brilliant, once again. This is the perfect missing moment. I thought I'd have to write it myslefto get it just write, but after reading this, there is absolutely no need. You hit it perfectly, Dean's emotions and words were spot on and really depicted, so realistically, how that moment would go. Ginny worked well, you used what we knew about her and illustrated new emotions we've never read her experience before. Loved that. Thank you, for the perfect read.

really good story! You really seemed to capture Ginny's thought's well! Keep writting!

I really think you got the emotions really well! I could feel the betrayal in Dean's vioce, and I felt so sorry for the poor boy. But, this is just an honest opinion, mind you, but I think repeating that Reparo sentence twice was a bit redundant. But then, people do it all the time in real life, so I guess that's okay. Good job! )

Jealous Dean... Poor Ginny.