Hey,

This short piece went a lot deeper than I thought it would go and I appreciate it for that. It was also well written.

Bye, smile :-)

it was good

Beautifully written.

That was a very good analogy, I loved it. I hope you are going to continue it. There are so many places you could take this. Very smart, very good.

I liked it, your take on that particular scene was very interesting and it made sense wow now that is talent lol good job:)