this was so good. it was the perfect plot line and everything! i just loved it.

HOLY HELL is right.

That was...epic. Incredible. Dramatic. Made me wanna DUN DUN DUN the entire time! How could that guy pull a gun on them? Ugh. Good thing Abby saved Wally, though. Ah. I love you. Is that weird of me to say? Because I really do love you.

Nice. Very Dark, and very good.

sad experience for Kuki, i mean, how can she live on knowing she ended a man's life, no matter whether he was completely INSANE .

nice one-shot

it was good but i personally didnt entirely like that ending :(

Incredibly beautiful. Very well-written story, you touched on their emotions very nicely. The prose fits nicely and flows along in an eloquent way. A very thought filled ending sentence, and the style is absolutely perfect. Only thing is, real guns don't exist in the KND world. xP

I really wasn't expecting all that and I usually don't go for the dark KND fics, but. . .

This was so intense and breath-taking, especially the climax, that all the dramatics and over-the-top stuff didn't matter. There was just a lot of thought and emotion put into this little, I'll call it a one-shot, that I couldn't help but adore it. Really, well-written, deep stuff. Excellent job.

Nicely done. You write well - hardly any errors. And your story was very interesting. Kudos!

Wow! I loved this story!Didn;t expect the end to happen though... Great job!