J'ai lu ton histoire il y a quelque jour et je viens de la finir. Je la trouve merveilleuse et touchante à la fois. l'idée de l'histoire les brumes d'avalon au début est splendide (ce qui est marrant c'est que la tnt la passé hier lol). Je suis triste pour Albus et Minerva après tout ce qu'ils ont endurée lors de l'enlèvement de Minerva mais perdre leur deux fils et encore plus dur. J'ai apprécié le faite qu'il voit Harry à la fin, comme pour montrer que l'espoir viendra prochainement.
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I read your story there some day and I have just finished. I find it wonderful and touching at once. the idea of history the mists of avalon the beginning is beautiful (what's funny is that the tnt happened yesterday lol). I am sad to Albus and Minerva after all they have endured during the removal of Minerva but lose their son and two even harder. I enjoyed the made he sees Harry in the end, as if to show that hope will come soon.

i started reading this story such a long time ago and now i have finally sat down and finished it. it was truly amazing. i am crying so much right now, the ending was so bittersweete (mostly bitter). everything was written so powerfully, it was one of the best written stories i have ever read.

Yeah, I used to think Albus and Minerva went together well. Up till Rowling said Albus was gay, LOL.

Thank you so much for continuing your story. I really liked this one and it'll be nice to see what happens to everyone. Thanks!

wow that was awsom os that's the end i think it's cool

hi, I love your story, please keep on writing

he is a fracking basterd

luv it

its realy good so far

when i was reading the last paragraph I was like, that's so Star Wars with the whole you killed my father thing. it really great. totally luv it

I'm crying. Literally. You have made me cry. I never cry. It's just so wonderfully written, and so sad, I can't believe Albus has really gone and now you tell me that his sons have died too, we just didn't know it. It's not fair.

You're a brilliant writer. Keep it up.

xxStellaxx

Wow, what an incrediably interesting ending. I am going to have to go read the entire thing again with the ending in mind. WOW

so is that the end? it seems to be and yet it's quite sudden, nice job i really like this story

yay! update at last, please keep going!

Interesting. I went back and reread the whole thing. You have quite a complex story on your hands. I am looking forward to finding out how you bring it all together.

I absolutely love your writing. The plot, storyline, and characters are all so perfect. However, there are quite a few grammatical errors. I would be willing to help you correct them if you'd let me.

Let me know what you think!

AmaranthineWhisper

o can't wait for more!