Hey sorting hat go back to your swamp, effing hillbilly scum

Except for one critic that thought like me which I agree with that Arwen should've had more of an effect I think you are catering to the feeling people who only care about romance and not quality. Your story offers nothing concrete and I bet you voted for Oh Bozo twice and think that he has them magic pen that saves the US which in reality just sends the money to China and Russia.

You liberals sure have weird likes and then when reality hits you y'all eat each other which is happening to the democratic party which uses the symbol of the jack ass. (donkey)

If this is just stolen from the script with only her name added then you deserve to be burned at Mount Doom along with the ring. The dark fire will not avail you! Flame of Udun go back to the shadow! You cannot pass!

I love your ideas and want to read more but I was really distracted by the phrase 'give a path she elf'. I think you need to take some time and edit your story or ask a beta reader to do it for you. But having said I really do love where you are heading with this tale, I feel it's a diamond in the rough that just need some cutting and polishing to really shine.

This was fantastic! I loved what you did with Arwen :)

I love this story! I love arwen join the felowship! I can't wait to see what will happen when they arrived at rohan and see that eowyn has feeling for aragorn! Please update soon! Really love your story :D

Please update!

This is a great story : )
Since you are getting in the Two Towers I think you should know that Peter Jackson had planned that Arwen would go there to aid her lover with the contingent of elves but he cut that scene out for the deleted scenes.
Please continue this story!

I've just finished reading the entire story so far and I must say that it is decent but needs work and really isn't all that unique. I personally think you should've actually changed how things went to an extent due to Arwen being in the fellowship. Like for example, make Boromir survive when the fellowship split up in the first book.

I absolutely loved this story! thank you so much for writing it! xx

this is awesome!
just one thing- your grammar needs a little work. I'm not trying to be mean, really! It's just something I noticed and I thought I would offer some constructive criticism. :)

When will you start the next one

When wil the next story come

this ending is sweet. can't wait for the next story.

I totally love it. Love that they are having a race.