Just finished reading the whole thing, it was amazing, too real for fanfiction, the cynicism, the trying to fill your emptiness with sex and porn. And you've portrayed the characters so well, Ryou's loneliness, Joey's stupidity, Yami's... ...whateverness.
Bottom line, do you still write?:)

OMGOMG LOVE IT! Update soon pleaseeee! XD

I wish Yami Jouno would be gone and let Joey come back. Poor Mokuba is going to be shocked.

...TT-TT you killed Ezra I must now hunt Joey down and kill him! then I'll kill Kaiba *sadiastic grin* but seriously why'd you kill him he and Mokuba woulde've mad such a cute couple (yes im serious) im mad at you *pouts* now HURRY THE HELL UP AND UPDATE AND YOU BETTER MAKE EZRA NOT BE DEAD please

I hope you update soon, i loove this story! So twisted! Cant wait for moree!

WAAAAAAHHHHHH how could you how could you kill Ezra oh say it aint so say hes not dead please i dont care how you do it just make it so that hes not dead! please i beg you make it so that hes not dead i'll be depressed for the rest of my life if you dont pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease

;)

Gosh I feel so lost. I can hardly keep up with the different crazy people. I feel bad for Mokuba and Ezra.

this story is so, so perfect, oh my god. it's so rare to find a fic where ryou has a backbone, and the jounouchixkaiba set up is original and enthralling. please update soon, i wanna know what happens next D;

Poor Bakura is really confused. Ryou and Jouno are crazy.

good chapter

Poor Ryou is a mess. Jouno was framed and I hope he can get rid of those evil beings in his body.

pleaz update soon i love this fic so much

Lovely how Ryou goes in denial every time he's hurt Bakura. Especially in this chapter, when he told Mariku and Yami it was alright and Bakura was already awake and stuff. :3

/will be waiting like a nice girl for you to continue some day

This is one of the most AU, flipped, backwards stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading.