I'm banging my head against the wall right now. Why Tin-Tin, why?! Why did she have to have that outburst? I was especially annoyed when Tin-Tin thought: 'That's what got us into this mess in the first place. You and your stupid need to risk your life.' Risking their lives is what all of them do all the time! And its not like Alan purposely bashed his head on the ground, although he REALLY should have got that seen to. Medicine 101: Don't brush of a head injury. C'mon man. Things are really heating up though - it feels like Tracy Island is one massive roasting pot. Tin- Tin is roasting Alan, Kyrano is low-key roasting him too, Gordon and Scott are roasting each other... i feel really bad for Alan; even though usually I get the 'petulant child' vibes from him, he's really had it tough waking up from a coma only to be hit with such a terrible atmosphere and the 'you-kissed-me-but-you-don't-remember' bombshell. Damn, I had no idea I'd be getting so into this. I don't usually read fics based on the Thunderbirds movie but this is awesome. I have 2 more chapters left!

Ah...I'd almost forgotten that Jeff didn't get a segment in the titular chapter
And ironically he's he only one who's actually said what he wouldn't have gotten to say if Alan hadn't woken up
Tintin hasn't actually casually said that she loved him (nether has he) and none of the brothers have actually opened up despite promising to
It's not even because they didn't mean to keep the promises in he first place, it's just how everything's turned out
Thank god for the sequel, eh?

Oh jesus christ that's...bad
That's fucking HORRIFIC and TERRIFYING
Bombs...jesus christ. ..and to be responsible for the Mine as well. ..nicely done not drawing attention to him there

fuel tablets from any camping store …" AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

Ooooh as soon as memory loss was mentioned in figured this would happen...

Ooooh crap someone's worked out heir decree, haven't they?

I love the PATTERNS of this chapter! It's the iconic chapter that the fic us named after, and it's beautifully crafted
The elder brothers considering how different Alan is from them except for Gordon, whos relationship os so different, despite some neighbours else having thought about how different he is to Alan
The idea of them all having a different view of Hospital life...all having different reasons to hate it, to want things to change and not have to come back here anymore...
Kudos man, this is a masterpiece

ROLL CREDITS

Oh SHIT

Ooooh. ..head injury
Crapsicles

Christ man...

Oh hell...

Great story!(:

Hiya! This story is my first foray into the world of Thunderbirds fanfiction, and I loved it! I love the interaction between the brothers, and Tin-Tin and your Alan are awesome! Off to begin reading the sequel now... I'm sure that it'll be just as brilliant!

a good story. i am rereading it as i enjoyed it that much. thank you