Reviews for A Promise to Rin
Mirage chapter 10 . 8/9
I wonder ...this chap was a little strange.
She did know rin from when she was sick and then traveling to her pack...so why does he know nder if rin is nice or if she will play with shippo when she knows the girl at least somewhat ...
Also why act so aggressive and disrespectful when he does try to let her eat the right food. She did what he did give her when sick ans traveling too...

Also he did kiss her . not just a smack to the cheek but more deeply ...not something a human hater would do
..so why say this in talk with sango ...she knows he has a soft side that he likes rin and even accepts when she herself asked him for something. ..

And to say inuyasha is her one true love. ...that is just plain silly...she did not harbour a crush like this for him since she know he loves kikjo and always sees her as second. ..

...so what happened to her relaxes and peaceful being around sesshomaru, how she feels safe and protected how close ...is she under drugs ...or naraku in play?
Mirage chapter 8 . 8/9
So true...she needs calm strong and adult who shows her when it is really enough but let's her play too like he did with Rin and he needs happiness and some crazyness and someone gentle

And inuyasha . ..is way to young...he still is a pup...he was sleeping for 50years and not learning and growing up like other hanyou. ...he needs to catch up first...or an more adult female like kikjo who can lead him and calm him down and control him ...like he always did when kikjo called.
Mirage chapter 5 . 8/9
He really did defend her well...poor guy-but it really seems his in was in the front till all foes where gone...where was his back armor and mockomocko or his poison whip? ...but when she would not have been standing there like defenceless baby he could have worked better around her and not used him self as shield..she ciuld habe kweed his back free of treats..she really needs to learn to put her power in other things ...hands...sword , knife, needle...hand fan...metallic fighting fan..dancing scarfs ,
Mirage chapter 3 . 8/9
Cute...but kagome really needs to learn from master rin the puppy look and to follow orders at least in some way...Luke going in front of the cave but not much more...and when restless train meditation yoga tai chi or some dance moves... ;)

But I think you make a tiny mistake in something . You always write samma. ..but is it not ...sama?
Mirage chapter 2 . 8/9
Sesshomaru in all his indifference and cold demeanor. ... is so whipped by this little girl who has him wrapped around her little finger with just he smiles and pleading eyes...so cute.. -

And to say this to a teen girl ...bad to make her cry...and that after his own brother acts the same way and says also so charming things...at least kouga trys to be nice in his own wild way...
TaxLady0415 chapter 14 . 4/24/2019
I simply love this story - rereading it always brings me joy.
Vamptisha chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
man i love reading this story again is so good
Slytherinsister21 chapter 14 . 7/25/2018
I love this story to the moon and back but I have to say the ending did make me cry. bittersweet moment there
viviane.bonneau chapter 14 . 2/28/2018
perfect ending 3
viviane.bonneau chapter 13 . 2/28/2018
omg nuh stabbing pains
viviane.bonneau chapter 12 . 2/28/2018
awesome chapter and loved the mingling of their auras
viviane.bonneau chapter 11 . 2/28/2018
oof kagome do not refuse the sesshomaru!
viviane.bonneau chapter 10 . 2/28/2018
*simply gasps*
viviane.bonneau chapter 9 . 2/28/2018
*flails!* Sesshomaru is such a good mate tending to his beloved worries and needs.
viviane.bonneau chapter 8 . 2/28/2018
eeeee i loved this chapter. From the kimono Sesshomaru brought her to mark her as his and his instinctual behavior to ward off others due to his youkai recognition before his own feelings.

I also completely agree with your author notes at the end for the pairings! 3
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