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That's it...you had me in tears, woman! That was such a beautiful...insane...dramatic...passionate...brutal...cruel...aawesome...powerful...and everything else under the sun! I am so honored to have read this and thank you so much for sharing it! This story was truly incredible! Each chapter flowed from one to the next without skipping a beat from ideals, to characters to what the hell was going on. Even in the trial my attention was capture and I never lost sight of what was going on. I'm just so giddy over this! *SQUEE!* Still...Uriel and Raz need some lov'n. I could make up something for those two but it would just be filled with wicked desire, traumatic cruelty...and loving smut. Sounds good, huh? Like always...I am so glad I found your work. Thank you again!

Holy Hell if that wasn't beautiful! I love how Lucifer and Alexial are being such little boogers, trying to get a wedding going. You know, if they wait a bit...there could be one of those nice southern shot-gun weddings. Darn tootin. As I was saying...so beautiful I was almost in tears at the end. I should be studying for my classes but I can't get my mind off this story. So now I'll just have to finish it so I can concentrate on Johnson and that silly English Dictionary. Pftt...dull.

And as for poor Uriel. *Grins evily wiggling fingers* I'll make him nice and happy. Come here you sex-muffin you! I've got cookies!

Luci loves hugs? *glomps* There's a hug! I love that name, Luci. Any way, I meant to say it in my last review that was...what...10 minutes ago? Sorry for the delay...I had to go make muffins. But I love the fact you brought Katou in it! Besides Uriel...he's my next favorite hottie! And love the cookie part to him. Great job!

Okay...so I had to review this chapter on its own. Holy Hell again! I loved how you brought Lucifer into the last chapter...so funny! But then this one kept me on the edge of my bed...yep...reading in bed. Poor Michael! I didn't know who to feel more sorry for...him or Nema. But then Nema went and kissed the other hottie and then I was even more confused. That's okay...I'll comfort Michael. *evil grin* But well done as always!

Okay, so it's like chapter 19 and I'm just now sending you a review. Sorry! I got caught up reading your story and then Bleach came on so I was screwed. Lol. When Espada show up...there goes my attention span. Any way...first off...OMG! Up till now these chapters were incredible! I couldn't turn away. Okay, I did once to make some coffee. I LOVE how you brought so many of the characters in and kept them all to their canon. I could feel the emotional strain coming from both Nema and Michael, it was heart wrenching when he got caught...but still so much fun to have the two bickering about each other even when seperated. But oh...how sad when she fell to her "death" and Michael was right there.

And Raph's gonna be a daddy? How cute! And there's my Uriel! Love the man. I know you're already done with this but I shall say it any way...KEEP IT UP! This story must be one of my all time faborites!

Holy Hell this was just...crazy! I was laughing so hard my dog was staring at me as if I was going nuts. I love all the cursing. I could picture those two rolling around on the floor pulling each others hair, kicking...smacking...bit ol' cat fight go on with curses and death threats only to get in trouble because it's Christmas and they're going at it 'cause each thinks the other snagged the last cup of liquor spiked egg-nog. Oh...wait...that's my family christmas party. Whoops. Lol. But I have to say those two are adorable together even with the chopstick stabbing and smacking and cursing. There's just something about Michael that you just want to pinch his cheeks even if you might not live through it. Then again...I would love to grope Uriel. Men with long, dark hair are just down right delicious. Thanks for the link! It worked fine. So now I know what you're talking about. Lol. and thank you for putting me on your alert. I'm not sure I'll have any stories that you are interested in. But feel free to take a peek! I'm currently hashing out a plan for a Raph fic once I get a few of my Bleach done. I did do a Katou Yue one-shot...so naughty. Well, have a good night!

OOH! Love the first chapter. The bickering between Michael and Raph is just bonkers. Well done for them. I love all the chatting betwen Nema and her parents, Setsuna and Sara are just too cute together. So well done. I hope you do not mind but I'll probably offer a review to each chapter...since I can't write for a little while on my own fanfics...stupid stiches. Hence why I am only using one hand to type this. What a pain in the BEEP. Again, thank you for sharing your wonderful creativity! One question...what the heck is a mini-crown and why does she seem to wear one? Just me being not so smart with fashion these days.

I like the idea but a few things bother me (not big things though haha)

I thought it was strange how Nema could freely cuss like a sailor in front of Setsuna without him getting mad AT ALL. It wasn't very fatherly...the other thing is I felt like there was a whole lot of dialogue and not enough descriptive wording that described the scene or the facial expressions of the characters. Lastly, the usage of Japanese words is a little strange when they are speaking in English.

That's all! I'll continue reading though because it's interesting! :D

Wow. It's been a long time. To let you know, I did finish the story. And loved it. A long time ago. It's an amazing achievement, to have written an interesting, complex story this long.

Okay my first question is ARE YOU KAORI YUKI?

I mean that was singly the best written thing I've come across and since I live on fanfiction you can imagine how much I've read.

I only started reading this because I wanted an idea how the writing style of own fanfiction should be formed and what happens?

WHAT HAPPENS?

Three days I sit here laughing hysterically, crying my eyes out, wishing I could marry Raphael...or maybe Mika-chan...

You are beyond brilliant and I am so moving over to the sequel now...

DAMMIT WHY DO YOU WRITE SO WELL?

Anyway Let me just take a moment AND A REALLY DEEP BREATHE TO SAY that you have an amazing writing talent and that you should never give it up...

I thought Angel Santcuary was perfect...I think this is better.

So write more WRITE MORE DAMMIT!

Axé

Sian!

it's fucking brilliant! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! IREAD IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN! PLEASE PLEASE FINISH UP LAYERS!THANKS!

This story is absolutely godly amazing! *Q* The characters are so well put and everything! Michaek and Nema make the best couple ever...automatic fav! XDD I agree with you on your last note "God dammit, there are some things you just don’t fuck with" XDD ABSOLUTELY!

Wonderful story. The ending was certainly a surprise.

Thank you.

She seems like such a wonderful little angel of death. Your story has certainly taken an interesting turn, and I look forward to seeing how it will turn out.