i absolutely loved your story but i felt there were too many things left unsaid and undone. snape, ginny, draco's family, the weasleys..., i would have liked to see harry finally do what is right. also, sometimes harry and draco seemed to forget things they had said before.
otherwise, this was a good attempt amd i trully enjoyed it. thank you.

I loved this. It felt kind of like you stopped it in the middle, though. This was all about hope for the future and who Harry would choose and all of that, it just seemed unfinished, you know? There was no closure with Ginny or anything, still 3 horcrux's, and just no definite end. I don't know.
I loved the last line, "Forgiveness, after all, was better than revenge." That was probably the best concept, ever.
Uhm, I really loved that we got to see both of their POV's, I always love that. You did tend to change words, though, which was honestly bothering me a little. It's not obvious, but small word tweaks can change the significant of a sentence substantially, so that was kind of a major stand out to me. You also repeated things in both POV's that wasn't really necessary. It just got repetitive and long to read, you know?
I loved the tentative trust building going on here, it seemed very realistic and easy to relate to. I also loved that you kept Snape mostly a mystery, as he is in the book, that was a nice touch.
The Gobstones games were the best, I loved your ideas! I also loved how Mrs. Weasley took Draco in right away, so sweet.
So, i love your story, great job!

I really love this story, the only problem I had was when you repeat a line someone said, it would be different in wording than the original wording. I think it would be a lot smoother and easier to read if a lot of the chapters weren't half re-wrote in the others point of view. Some of the parts it made sense to see it in each Harry's and Draco's point of view, but others didn't need to be re-read.
Still a great read though : )

please update

Hi,
I've really enjoyed this beautiful story and also Settlement. I would really like to read the, erm, NC17/18 rated versions please but you don't have PM enabled to give you my email address.
Please get in touch.
Thanks you very much
C x

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

Really enjoying this story. Especially the cutting descriptions of Bristol and Bath - I spent 10 years living in Bath. C x

The overlapping perspective is really annoying.

I wish I could PM you and ask what your website is so I could get the complete story or pressure you to continue on with the next story in this characterization.

However, I enjoyed this story and your attempts to keep the characters in character as much as possible and the slow realizations made throughout the story. I liked the slow build between the characters and the adherance to what came before.

Stephanie

Glad he ended up with Draco. I really, really don't see how Harry could have loved Ginny. She is such an awful and annoying character. It's not jealousy, I just don't understand, I couldn't possibly. I mean I've had crushes on celebrities but we weren't together, its not possible. But of course Rowling made it that simple, Ginny was living in a fantasy, that's all it was.

I know this story is quite old but I really wish Harry would just give up on Ginny. She is not good for him, she doesn't even deserve him and him thinking he would rather be with her than Draco is getting on my nerves. I really dislike Ginny.

I think I just died at the last thing Harry said, haha. :) Another great chapter, love!

It's getting interesting! I'm so excited to read about the first confrontation with Ginny. :) Love, love, LOVE this story, my dear. :)

OMG I love all your work... just wanting to know what your website is for further reading. I have not been able to find it, or for that matter your email address. Thanks

MS:)

this was amazing. I would love to read more stories set in this time-frame