| Reviews for Improv |
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   DementedOwlWitch chapter 9 . 6/13/2017 This is really good! Great characterisation. Very funny. Please update ASAP! |
| Mandriel chapter 8 . 3/31/2012 Lol, poor Willy! I feel more sorry for him than the parants! |
| Snickerdoodle Black chapter 9 . 1/17/2012 Despite not bothering to review until just now, I love this story and want you to update. |
| blueberrypecan chapter 9 . 7/15/2006 This story is so demented! XD update soon, please! I can't wait to see what happens next XD |
| blueberrypecan chapter 2 . 7/15/2006 hehehe, it's perfect, I love it. You got his character just right, I wouldn't be surprised if that was what was really going on in his dememted head XD |
| jeevesandwooster chapter 9 . 5/14/2006 Charlie Buckets! oh dear... |
| Kara chapter 9 . 4/16/2006 You write the parodied version of Wonka *incredibly*. I love your writing style. By the way, I just looked it up: thesarus, n. treasury; repository, lexicon, dictionary. See PUBLICATION. None of those words really fit it, though, do they? I love this story. I am looking foward to reading the next chapter very much. :) |
| Alice in June chapter 9 . 3/26/2006 God, I heart you. I always turn to this fic for good laughs (Joan Rivers, Mandy-candy-randy), lady you are awesome. I'd tell that to you in 10 different languages but I'm only bilingual and I can't even speak dialects of my mother tongue. 'Time stood still, like it wanted the papparazzi to get a good shot.' HEART. |
| kiffer chapter 2 . 3/21/2006 Good. Very good. Great in fact. |
| Nfinity chapter 9 . 1/31/2006 LOL...all the nut jokes were worth the LONG wait for this chapter. "Corruption Followed Me Home: Can I Keep It For A Pet?" Can I put that on a t-shirt? That is just like something I'd see at school. I realy ejoyed this long-awaited, albeit short, and eventful chapter...YAY! Nfinity |
| KitArchivist chapter 9 . 1/30/2006 "Was there any chance of meeting some nice girl with good teeth who was even more socially retarded than I was?" Ooh! Ooh, me! *waves hand in the air* I wore braces for a year and a half, various other orthadontal torture devices for about 5 years before that, and I brush and floss twice a day. And it's well known that I have no social life. Am I qualified? "Time stood still, like it wanted the papparazzi to get a good shot." I love this line to an unreasonable extent. |
| Fisticufffs chapter 9 . 1/29/2006 mandy and becky insulting Wonka? that's just not normal... Crap, if they're out of the story it will be much less entertaining. |
| Mongie chapter 9 . 1/28/2006 Funny chapter. O, Becky and Mandy are in trouble now. I can't wait to see what they do. I liked the Slugworth confrontation to. It was very descriptive and funny. |
| x.Sess.x.Satan.x chapter 9 . 1/28/2006 i cannot express how insanely hyper and excited i am that you've updated this! and it's as wickedly funny as ever! *does happy dance and re-reads* . .x. ps. by the way, the thesaurus thing from chapter five has worked it's way into the every day conversations i have with my friends...not sure how... |
| Opalinesque chapter 7 . 12/21/2005 Gilbert? But it's a barrel of nuts, not grapes- *is killed for making that joke* XD Yay for Random, for her writing pwns the universe! *starts a 'we-love-Random party* _ |
