Reviews for No Longer Helpless
Guest chapter 3 . 6/10
I adore harry so much when he thought about Draco‘s messy hair lol
MotekElm chapter 36 . 12/9/2019
nice AU after 5th year. I like the creature
MotekElm chapter 21 . 12/8/2019
wierd going back and forth in time
MotekElm chapter 12 . 12/8/2019
nice romantic angst
MotekElm chapter 8 . 12/7/2019
great chapter
MotekElm chapter 1 . 12/7/2019
interesting start. seems a bit Americanized, but otherwise well written.
DiagonAli chapter 36 . 8/15/2019
really fascinating story. I wish we could have had a more clear look at the Angelus powers and what that meantwhile it was discussed, it still felt too vague.

still, I loved Moody and Draco's friendship, I loved the Auror training and how they fell in love.
PerryPair chapter 21 . 5/18/2019
If they put aside the hostility and societal views, Hermione and Draco do have the best partnership in the HP universe. Matching of wit, the amusing banter... its like Ladybug and Chat Noir
0odr8co's'girl0o chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
I continue to love this story just as much as I did after first stumbling upon it over a decade ago. Thank you for all the thought and detail you put into creating this piece - it makes for one incredible ride :)
guest chapter 36 . 9/10/2018
Hum... I like you writing but there are too many things unanswered. What exactly are the Angelus powers ? Just destruction ?
And during all the story they are speaking of the fact that Voldy wants to use her but it is EXACTLY what Dumbledore is doing, using her ! They are even presenting things like it would be her fault if her friends died ! Dumbledore manipulates her ! Hermione would see the real purpose and she wouldn't let Dumbledore use her. She would let Harry, but not Dumby or even the Order.

Oh and that's personal but, did she really needed to be a Virgin Queen ? Why so many fanfic contain a virgin Hermione ? She is not afraid of guys and I doubt that's she's still a virgin when she is with Ron at the end of the book.
Makoyi-sik chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
Man this chapter is seriously making me paranoid while I’m reading in my pitch black room early in the morning. You’re a very good author, go for some horror stories when you write
morganalafeye chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
I'm on chapter 10 right now, and as much as I'm enjoying this fanfic so far I have to ask, how does "I'm glad I can be so amusing for you" get misconstrued into something that could make Malfoy blush? no matter how I look at it just doesn't make any sense to me...
mochikochi chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
I love how you portait Draco here, his relationships with Moody, and Hermione too. Its just so perfect
mochikochi chapter 36 . 6/22/2018
I love this
11DarkPhoenix11 chapter 36 . 6/20/2018
Beautiful story
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