| Reviews for Seiken Densetsu 3: Where His Heart Points |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 cute story :))))))))))) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 rtytujytu |
 Narwhale chapter 1 . 3/27/2013 I remember playing this game as Hawk years ago, and seeing his story, I thought "Okay, Jessica is in danger, she must be important to him" etc. But after seeing interactions with Lise throughout the game, my feelings towards Jessica changed ALOT. I'm sure that's how Hawk felt, too. Such complications... Overall, this was relatively good as far as grammar and punctuation goes. Nothing seemed off or incorrect, but it wouldn't hurt to have had more detail to add more depth to this (but of course, that's one-shot stories for you). Of course, you'll probably never get the chance to read this, seeing that it is now 2013, but great work anyways... |
| g chapter 1 . 12/20/2007 It was great LOL jessica being a weak pathetic wimp |
| Toki chapter 1 . 10/15/2006 I love love triangle! Kekeke... Seeing that you haven't updated for years...I hope that you would update quite soon... ' Just don't make it too corny that I wouldn't be able to read it please :p |
| Witch Girl Pilar chapter 1 . 2/23/2006 What a cute story. Remebering your loved one... aw... nice one! |
| Amanda chapter 1 . 3/27/2005 I love ,I think that Jessica is more like Hawk's ~perfect story! |
| Seonaid Mist chapter 1 . 4/5/2004 Ke! So good! Me like! Do more! |
| Sunflower-chan chapter 1 . 10/7/2002 yay, a hawk/lise fan too! _ Great story, you won't believe how long it took me to find a good fic starring those two! |
| SwTaNgELbErRiEzZ chapter 1 . 9/2/2002 This was very sweet and crisp...er, fresh? Haha, it was very straighr-forward and nice. I agree with you in your notes, about Jessica and Duran with Angela. I wish you will do a sequel on this story! |
| Halee chapter 1 . 6/9/2002 YEAH!MORE-MORE KID! |
| darth tasuki chapter 1 . 5/22/2002 Wow. I absolutely love this fic. I think that Hawk and Lise just belong together like fleas on a dog. Okay, that's a bad analogy, but I can't think of anything else. Hawk and Lise just need to be together... sigh! Kodak moments! Thank you for your awesome, heartfelt fanfiction! |
| The Questioner of Reality chapter 1 . 5/12/2002 Real Cool is all I can say. Hawk is my altime favorite SD3 character. And Lise is my second. you really need to continue this or something. Most fanfics I think portray Hawk and the other characters completely out of character, but I think you this story is written very well. In some places there is a little unnecesary wordiness but that is just a reading ease problem. Great story. |
| Cactusmilkshake chapter 1 . 3/3/2002 PLEAAAASEEE make a sequel! I'm begging you! |
| ConfirmTheOriginOfFire chapter 1 . 2/22/2002 YEAHHH! I knew Lise and Hawk could make it! I KNEW it! Jessica's a b1t(h! She's just all WRONG for Hawk. I love your writing! Write more! |
