So sad that your stories aren't finished. You write beautifully.

I can't say that I have a good grasp on the trials, but I'm guessing that's something that will be explained more later. I am really enjoying this story. I really like the magic/studying that Harry has been doing with Olivander and friends. I also like his new outlook on people. Thank you for writing this.

please update immediately

Amazing story line so far, really enjoying it! I noticed its been a while since you'v posted I know I and others would really enjoy it if you would start posting again. SO much potential in this one, theirs so few Katie Harry fanfics out their really getting into this one.

Hi,

You have an excellent start to a story. You've change enough situations to make the story interesting but not so many where it has felt like changes just for the sake of change.

All the best should you decide to come back to this.

Old-Crow

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Very interesting and captivating story. I like how you really let them be their age and commit the mistakes or acting how young people really do. Especially well it's shown on the main relationship, but I hope they will be one of the few who in fact manage to overcome the first trials and stay together :)
It's indeed very nice so I hope it will continue some day

Excellent!

Yes! does a little happy dance! Terrific idea!

Okay, that's that. Sorry that this story seems dead, it had a lot of really interesting ideas and right now when the elaborate hints from the background changes we've got a glimpse in Harry's nightmares paid off and things really GOT new and interesting there is nothing more to follow it up. On the other hand a lot of the story is shaking and testing, not really sure where it wants to go with too many irons in the fire to really be faithful and fair to all of them...

I originally found this over the favoritestracker while searching for some unread Harry/Katie stories and thus maybe i'm biased towards expecting too much from their little dance around the whole feelings and falling in love thing, but it was the first sign of what i now think is wrong with this... we get a ginormous number of tantalizing glimpses on what may come, on what may some day be the center of the story and grow into a really important thing... but then the next of the countless plot points screams for attentions and the time is cut short. Rinse and repeat...
Add to it that with Dumbledore, Bones, Fudge, Ollivander ... the Death Eaters, you've got at least four, five scheming factions in the game, probably more and that as of now nothing precise is known about their motives and goals in the process and it's mighty confusing to what and which way this all might someday lead. There's no red thread through all of this with the possible exclusion of Harry's visions and the development of his magic into apocalyptic dimensions... and no real handhold to see that we're getting anywhere, just more and more of these tasty little morsels of stunningly interesting ideas strewn into the whole mix, but not necessarily sharing in the work of lifting the storyload or pushing the concept forward to a likely solution. I'm all for complexity, but this is close to mimicking the labrinth of minoan fame... And i have more than once noticed i'm losing interest in the details and the complexities just wishing to get a whiff of where it all aims at...
I've tried and stayed with it up to the end, but if this were a 79 chapter story i could not guarantee it would hold that way all the way... i cheer for the treasure trove of tiny changes, ind epth reflexions and innovative interpretations of the HP cosm, but i'm also getting lost between the lines, when everything always seems to end up in circles and without strong directions to go to.

What? Anybody spouting that monologue about clothing and the almost police state like apparatus and supergenius level memory/recollection necessary to fill all needs of fashion to me would instantly sink into the "institutionalize for the sake of humanity" category... Ron's standard utterance of "completely mental" doesn't even start to cover these ideas... more like "potentially lethally insane".

Must be the same level of mind breaking paradox like girls SWEARING on the truth of body types, color types and the like depending on your fitness, form, tan, hair- and eyecolor and many other things and then turn right around and greedily suck up the completely opposite ideas of magazines about "colors of the season" and styles/cuts that EVERYBODY will have to use this year. It's an advanced level of mental pretzeling no sane mind ever will be able to replicate...

btw... it's doubtful that ALL boys at Hogwarts would wear Jeans & T-Shirts, even if wizarding wear might have reached a level where Slacks and shirts are not that distinct from modern day muggle wear, the recreational clothing CAN'T possibly be the same in houses that despise muggle ideas, concepts and styles... Malfoy in a normal kid's day wear? Are you kidding? Even the Weasleys with their strongly backward ("Scarlet woman" what a laugh) mother would not be quite up to the nineties in the nineties...

And i'm pretty sure that in earlier Chapters Cephea was the wizarding mother of Katie's and Alexia the little sister...

Hmmm strange chapter... the interaction with the foreigners was okay and had some interesting aspects although it seems he is not quite that intent on using the Olivander technologies on everyone he meets once he's back at school... but the rest got confusing... his "relationship" with Katie is awkward and jumps around all over the place from glowing passion to "great she wants to talk i can't talk with her (now)" and neither does really seem to know what they want from this, which might be more realistic than other depictions, but still in the frame of a story i read for entertaining i find such tendencies - if going on for too long - a bit discouraging and turning my interest away from finding out more about the whole shebang and where it might end up...
and this cliffhanger scene was totally confusing... which again seems fitting when thinking about an attack and a fight situation, but still is leaving your reader with little to use to understand what happened and what it may mean for the future of the story (as little as there is)