that was so cute and funny! loved it! thanks for writing .

lol

Very cute!

great story!

:)

nice, really! keep writing!

bye!"

an_ from argentina!

Haha! I read this: "Just be you," Remus added. "And his Lily-radar-"

"And by that, Remus means his dick-"

"will find you instantly."

and knew I just had to review.

Nice story - yeah, the idea is probably not the most original, but it works nicely anyhow.

100% Love,

Michelle

HAHAHA...very funny and cute! loved it. keep up the good work!

CUTE,BUT NEXT TIME ADD AT LEAST YOU CAN TRY TO ADD THE SEX(THIS IS ME BEING BLUNT)

DON'T GET MAD,GET EVEN!

I must admit, I really adore this story. The way Lily reacted to the fact that she had slept with James was wonderful and Remus was quite funny. I enjoyed their commentary and the witty humor. You have a very original writing style, and that doesn't come along too often. Thank you for this pleasant one-shot. It made me smile, and any story that can do that is worth the review! Please continue writing, and have a wonderful day.

-Emily

tee hee! LOL! The ending was great! *adds to fave stories*. I loved the entire thing, but I'd have to say my favourite part was;

"Just be you," Remus added. "And his Lily-radar-"

"And by that, Remus means his dick-"

See ya, I'm going to check out your other fics!

~Grace

aww so sweet!

Soo cute!

ROTFLOL!

Wow that was a really god story i think you should keep it up enven though i think it is a 1shot it would be really interesting to find out that happend

that was good...you should integrate it into a story or something...it's to good to be a one shot!

awesome story - very funny! james IS a fox, heehee. you're a great writer, keep it comin!

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