This was a really fun story to read. And it's a great prompt for sequels if you're so inclined.

My favorite line by far was "I'm in a mall, playing National Treasure with Captain Obvious as my trusty sidekick." I could totally see that line pouring out of Lois' mouth!

Well done!

I likey... I likey the fics where they can just be goofy kids and have fun.

And the fact that Pete's in there... well, that's just the cherry on the freakin' top!

Wow! that was so much fun! Love the story, specially the ending! That's so Lois-wanting to win any challenge! LOL!

I truly enjoy stories like these where Clark is aware that he has "feelings" for Lois and she isn't aware of it- it made the kiss between them so much more sweeter! Sigh!

Thank you for sharing this!

I love this story! The idea of these characters going on a scavenger hunt in a mall is hilarious. The ending was perfect.

Ahh Poor Clark! Great story!

good sroy :)

That story had me in silent fits- seriously. Wonderfully written, and just darn HILARIOUS!

That was amazing! Their first kiss, Aw! Loved it!

hahahaha! live is so much better than pictures! whahahahahahahha!

This never gets old when I'm rereading it. Love it, Sonia. One of my definite faves.

Aw-so sweet! I love how Lois calls him, "farmboy". Reminds me of Mara Jade and Luke Skywalker-she calls him that, too. Must be something about blue-eyed farmboys. :) Write more!

that was great!

That was so good!

I love everything that you write!

I LUrve this. All your Clois work are amazing! Thnx for this gem.

that was really good.