I know I've read this ficlet before, but don't see that I've let a review for it - shame on me. :-p

Nicely done w/ just the right touch of Shep Whump and comfort by our favorite Scotsman.

However, FFN seems to have had a brain cramp & totally screwed up all your quotes in Ch. 2. So, you might want to do a search & replace on all the boxes w/ code on them for real live quote marks. ;)

Wonderful tag for the episode, but fanfic seems to have eaten all your quotes in the second chapter. Makes it difficult to read. /me kicks fanfic for you.

What a wonderful story! And I am very grateful for the second chapter too; it was well worth it.

Your knowledge of medcine is really convincing and I dearly felt for John being so miserable. Carson was such a caring doc and even Rodney showed his compassion behind the usual snark. Well-written and very well done!

nice story , wish there was a bit more of it but still nice story :-)

yes! find ford you must! *yoda voice* lost he is! be found he must! repeated myself, i am.

An excellent story very nice job.

I really like the ending : )! the characters were well done and the whole premise was nice. Very good job and keep up the good work : )

I enjoyed this chapter very much. Poor Col Sheppard, he's still carrying so much guilt around about loosing Ford. McKay was fun as usual.

Emotional AND physical whumping in an episode tag, you're spoiling us Jen! You do little character bits so well, like dropping in the fact that both McKay and Elizabeth mentioned Shep's trip to Ford's family, and that Carson has told Shep to use his first name but Sheppard still saves it for serious moments. Great fic.

Oh so very good! You really had me worried there for a few minutes. Very well written. Nice job of filling in the hole left by the show.

I love this is there more if there is post soon

Awesome beginning (at least I hope there is more coming). You read my mind - I was wondering about the radiation thing. They just left that hanging (as they are prone to do). Love where you are taking this so far.

I liked it, it was a nice ending for that situation in the glidder . . . : )

Perfect tone, matches the Stargate sensibility well. I liked following Sheppard's thoughts as he tossed the cup in the air.

Hey, you're good at the episode tag thing.*hinthint* :-)

Like it. I think things are going to get worse before they get better for Shep though. Please continue.