Huh. I guess this is the end, seeing as it's been almost 4 years? Well that sucks. This was kinda my favorite.

Anyways.

I liked it. I don't know why I'm reviewing though, cause you probably haven't been on in years. But on the off chance you are... maybe you could write something else?

Hi, really liking the story so far. Just a question about your title... I'm not really sure what you mean by it... Is 'exortum' acc. singular of 'exortus' or is it a participle of a verb? Because if what you mean to say is 'War caused on account of love' the proper rendition would have to be 'Bellum propter amorem exortus' as propter takes the accusative and the verb, i.e. exortus (because exortum is a noun) is always at the end of a sentence.

Please update this is one of the best stories on the site

I have only just fownd this story and I really like it. i luv how you've done the characters especially Lily(shes so funny) and James(its nice to find a ff where girls dont swoon as soon as he walks in a room)

i know there is a chappie 6 fret not. i just cant get to the bottom of the page to review. i hope u update asap. it is really good

I love your story, it's really genuine! All the characters are very real, none of the ludicrous stuff other authors have pulled. I hope you update soon!

this story is really great! but, why is it Rated M?

I really like this story. Update soon!

this is cute, please update soon

Sirius lose his hair? No!

Just kidding. But not really.

Anyway, great update, of course D

Just wanted to say, thanks for writing a dignified and intelligent james/lily fanfic, there's too much junk out there. Yours has got to be one of the best written I've read so far. As for the James being Head Boy, I always thought I was stupid or missed something but I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who didn't quite get that :-)

Anyway, keep up this writing, it's excellent. Finish this story, it'll set a good example :-P

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i think this is a great story and i really enjoy reading it so could you be nice and try updating faster? thanks. oh and i'm just wondering if there gonna be a confrontation between remus and james (about lily)? anyways keep on the good work.

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Thats amazing

I love it

update soon

Wow... no words! This is one of the absolutely best stories i have read in... well... years! I cant remember when i read a story with characters that actually seemed real - with motives and agendas and everything!

And the development was right up my alley so far :D

I can see that you have not updated in a long while. but please reconsider and continue this story! You cant leave it like this - it would be a crime! Please dont make me hex you ;)

I hope you will consider continuing this - ihave added both the story and you to my alert and favorites list! Truly amazing...

Don't you think you've tortured us long enough? What, do you have senioritis or something? Next chapter please! And an lj post wouldn't be out of line either :)