please continue your story and I want to know what happens next it's so cute when mahiru and mitsuru are fighting

MORE THERE HAS TO ME MORER

aw..they're holding hands! update soon!

0,0 YAY! _

ME LIKE!

This story is getting really interesting! COOL! _

I hope you continue! _~

Could we have some fluff or waff? puppy eyes

0,0 Cool chapter.

I can't wait to find out what happens! _

Keep up the good work! _~

WAH! CLIFFIES ARE NOT GOOD, EVEN IF THEY ARE SUBTLE! PLEASE WRITE SOON!

Whoa... that's foreshadowing for ya. And sorry, you're 14 now. I still don't feel like a loser writer, though. )

Hi! I really like this story so far- it makes me laugh! _ You're a really good writer, too. And you're 13! (That makes me feel hopeful cause I'm also a 13 year old writer).

Yay! That was great. The first few chapters were a bit sloppy but the latest was the best. I do miss Nozomu being a bit more watchful of Misoka though. Eheh, that happens to be my favorite coupling (Nozomu/Misoka). If you would put a bit more in there, please? 'Be greatly aprecciated. ::hugs you:: You happen to be about the first that uses all the characters at once and tries not to leave them out. I wish more people were like you for that. It's a shame to let such well planned characters go to waste.

And yes, foxes are too smart. That's why they need to be broken and slaves to vampires.. mwahaha ::huggles and loves on her Misoka-uke:: Ja ne! I shall review again!

Keep going!(Laughs crazily)Oro!

Nah it wasn't short at all, it was just the right length. The conversations between the character you do them so well and the reactions are right on the mark, nothing really needs to be changed at all; one or to typos, but who doesn't have one...I've got well...a lot. I really can't wait to see what happens on the plane, *imagines them dragging Mitsuru in a sraight jacket* that would be pretty funny. Until next time, Keep up the great writing! :)

Heheh Funny chapter *Edges away from Misoka* He scary when he gets mad. Another great chapter it's just funny and cute again, I love it. Well, I must now depart to work on art so that my mom doesn't also ground me from the compter. Until next time, Keep up the great writing! :)

I liked this chapter funny and adorable all in one like a ice cream cake. *Ryu: "Ice cream cake where?"* Anywhos, I shall now go read the next chapter. Till next time, Keep up the great writing! :)

This story is enjoyable. Please write longer chapter if possible.

Interesting start, I hope to see more soon. And I must clap for how well you personify (?) Misoka, he's just the right amount of saracastic and mysterious. Until next time, Keep up the great writing! :)