whaa tis is really good! it actually made me cry, i sorta fel sorry for hanabi but i agreed with Temari

A fantastic sequel! I love your take on Hinata - it's so unique and interesting. I'm definetly going to be reading more of your stuff!

My god, thats dark, sad but good, very good.

You should continue this, I liked it, and I thought it captured their feelings and relationships perfectly, wonderful job!

i am crying...

wow..jus...wow this n little sister...

This is really cool, I can't wait to read the others!_ She's very...forgiving, isn't she?

I think I liked Little Sister better, but this was well done as well. Hinata really reminded me of Grace from Shotting Butterflies by Mariko... something, started with a C. Copperbold? Meh.

Anyways, I once again enjoyed your use of Temari (Shikamaru broke up with her? Aww! :( ) It was well written again... I like how she always called him Daddy. I thought you wrote Hiashi very well, by the way.

Hey, if you have time, might you want to write one about Hinata and Neji? Twould make me happy... and he was never mentioned at all, so I'm wondering...