| Reviews for Impatience |
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MollyMuffinHead chapter 17 . 6/21 Sweet love story. The Ogata parts were funny. I think you kept the pair in character very well. It was a delightful read because of that. Thanks for the story. |
MollyMuffinHead chapter 14 . 6/21 I can totally see Ogata doing that. |
Grey Cho chapter 17 . 1/9/2018 *inhales.*exhales Ok. I'm not ok. Uhhh. What is this? The first chapter, i didn't think it'd be this gorgeous. I expected something simple. But then, the story brought me to this feeling. It hurt yet made me happy. I love everything in this fict. I realize that it can be canon, it has to be canon. Obata should make the sequel about them being together. I always wonder how much they kneel over each other. I remember the manga having waya said, "Is it just Touya who is in your mind all along?" something like that. I love how perfect you write this. Thank you. Thank you for this fict. Thank yoh for making them still in character. They won't throw go. Ever. They relationship was about go and now, beyond of go. |
JBubbles chapter 17 . 3/28/2013 Cutest fic ever! My god, can they beeee more fluffy?! I adored how you grew their interactions and I loved the plot! Kisses and congrats! |
Guest chapter 17 . 2/10/2013 Aww! This is so cute! XD |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/9/2013 Pour it slowly until it takes up about 4 mokus of territory... hahaha that's hilarious! It cracked me up imagining recipes written like this... XD |
pandoravanity chapter 17 . 10/13/2012 i love how their mother react when both of them decided to date and move together.. though i really like ogata you know... |
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 6/9/2012 Omg amazing and adorable! I love it! :) |
ohmyotps chapter 17 . 1/16/2012 This fiction is definitely worth a look. It's A tender and sweet story that is just has to be read. It will make you smile, it is that lovely and loving. |
nequam-tenshi chapter 17 . 2/18/2010 wonderful story! |
gooddaytoyou chapter 8 . 9/20/2009 too sappy..its good but too out of character. Lack the intensity that characterizes the Akihika relationship. |
gooddaytoyou chapter 1 . 9/15/2009 I like it, it seems in your story the lovely couple has outgrown their un requited sexual tension stage, and went straight onto old couple stage. Neither of them freaked out, and Akira was so cool about it. |
Audrey chapter 9 . 6/15/2009 "'They think I have carpal tunnel from too much speed go. I can't decide if I think that's cool or not.' " This line made me laugh out loud. A tiny little correction, though- everyone has carpal tunnels, what the doctor would say Fukui had is "carpal tunnel SYNDROME". Thanks for the cute story, I love lots of relationshipy-buildup. I did wish initially that they'd had a little bit more of an angsty beginning- it seemed way too easy- but the fact that you didn't just throw 'em into bed together that night, and the sweet and sincere writing thereafter, is making up for it quite well. |
Kamitra chapter 17 . 5/20/2009 This might be ridiculous to say, but I am sad for Ogata. |
lolligje chapter 17 . 3/5/2009 wonderful, very, very, wonderful. i really love your writing style. you made a super story with a lot of romance, hot yaoi sences and a very good dose of humor, and i think of that as a very rare talent. i hope to read more of you're story's! (and really, if you aren't already, you should consider becoming a profesional writer!) |