I hope you intend to make the epilouge and post it! I'm crying right now! This is officially my one of top five favorite stories ever! Strangely they all have that insane twist moment at the end that makes you cry.

Ryou... The poor thing... That was really his only choice... I think if I was in his position I would have done the same...

Plz update!

Crying... I'm crying... This is the reaction I have a lot, but it's not because it's dark, it's because he's DEAD.

OMG! its soo sad. and yet i love it cant wait for more!

aww *snif* that stry was good so far, i cant wait to see the epilogue! I feel sorry for all the characters tha knew ryou...

No! Ryou's dead Q.Q That was very sad, and even more sad, we get to read about his dad's reaction too. I'll be looking forward to the epilogue (quite curious of what it will say...)

Good job overall.

FYI, it would be Dissociative Identity Disorder. Schizophrenia is massively different.

RYOU! :( Aww... Poor guy! *sniffs* But still, it was a great ending! :P Thanks for updating by the way! :D Can't wait for the chappie w/ the epilogue! UPDATE ASAP!

wahaha...*shniffle* how long would it take for you to update it? I'm desperate to know the end!

This is a good plot...xD Hail to you!

COOL! The writing's brilliant man, just brilliant. *_*

You really give emotion to your characters and that's something I can appreciate. Such a sad story though, would've liked to see it go another way, but I guess that just aint possible. To think, it could've been all avoided if Ryou told her the -truth- about who she was at an earlier age. Maybe then, she would've looked at him differently, and learnt to love him like he wanted her too. :\

Too bad, so sad. :(

Only one thing that I didn't get too well. The bulk of Chapter 8 was exactly what happened in Chapter 7. It seemed kind of redundant to copy and paste the whole thing, don't you think? Even with the little extra you added, I don't think it was necessary to re-tell the scene at Malik's apartment.

Other than that, REALLY good stuff, uppin' for the ending. :)

Peace.

Now I'm depressed. Man, that's...sad. I mean, driven to suicide? Poor, poor Ryou. T.T So he really did kill himself. I think I might cry... Don't get me wrong, it was good and all, but so, so sad.

I was wondering: why did you repeat the scene from your last chapter? It seemed sort of unnecessary to me. No offence or anything.

Anywho, I hope you update soon. I want to know how it all ends. Oh, the suspense! XD

-Berrie

Aww that was so sad. I love your story and you are a very gifted writer and I can't wait to read the epilogue so please update really really really really really soon!

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Well, I suppose this is a different look at the pairing. I'd truthfully never read something like this within the Ryou/Anzu genre; so sad and bitter. And it can bring a person down. But the sheer emotion that you've put into the story and how the characters were portrayed made it very interesting to read. I didn't think it would end this way either and ended up saying to myself, "Wow. This author really got me hanging." So... good job on this. I hope you come out with more.

i absolutely love this story! its so sad...i love it! i hope you post up the epilogue soon!

NO RYOU'S DEAD! TT-TT

how soon is soon? i hope it's soon because the 'soon' has passed...for short...please update:)