This was just lovely. It's been quite a while since I've read a ShunNao fic. I had forgotten how much I'd loved their delicious banter. The story felt well-paced. Though I would suggest the usage of a few asterisks or other symbols to break up the story...a couple times I was confused at the timing. But, all in all this was sweet. Thanks for posting.

Did he die?

I'm confused.. lol

love it though

This was wonderful! I liked the word choice, the pairing is nice too. Thanks for the read.

This is so sweet and adorable! It has made my day!

very good.

*sniffle* absolutely gorgeous

GAH~ That was so sweet! I actually got tears in my eyes right now! You should continue this with just a little thing cause I can't stand not knowing if he died or not!

This is a really great story!

Wow. Amazing story. Beond good. Great pairing to boot. Writting this good is so very hard to come by.

Oh sniff! Is our loveable flirt Shunsui dead? *collapses and bawls her head off* Really well written and greatly enjoyed!

This is great. I've always been a fan of this pairing because they are so hilarious together. But you have rendered a style of storytelling in this fanfic that makes it quite different. It's touching.

What a beautiful story! I love it! :) So prety... and yet so sad... great job!

I agree with your other reviewers, this story IS great!

*hypnotizes you*

You. Write more. Now. Tehe D

It was brilliant *adds to favourites*

You... are amazing. This fic is absolutely gorgeous... it made me a little teary near the end when Nanao was crying, though. And I loved their last peaceful evening together... although it makes me wonder what the rest of the Gotei 13 did. At any rate, adding this to favorites. AMAZING.