Good story

omg, dude thats fucked.

personally, it's just ok.

not good but not bad.

marcy

...wtf?

Tee hee ... I love the fics where Marche dies. Good work! It's really well written, too, though maybe you could have had Montblanc obliterated in there somewhere.

I meant jon, kupo, sorry, kupo...

nice story

Wes, this is finally dark enough to be given to this bible humping christian ass world. Good. Also, kupokupokupo... you are fuckin crazy

Just kill them all. Oh I though of a hell of a funny prank to pull on people on the freeway when you get here.

Poor Pedro, kupo. There's nothing worse than having someone die in a jagd. I'm glad as hell that you didn't have to start out like this in the game, kupo. Keep up the good writing and maybe even a sequal to this would be nice.

Kupo