I find this to be an interesting direction to take Escaflowne. LOL Hitomi is 5'10"? A veritable giantess in Japan... LOL

Update some time.

hey great fic, get your but off the couch and start working on that plot lol jk anyway great way to start the first chapter...keep up the great work and try to update

halerious so cool

wow good start xan love it keep up the good work its wonderful ... an in responce i just need 2 rewrite part of my next chappy then it will b up :p

Alexa

That was the awesome. I actually couldn't tell it was you 1st by reading it. You seem like an experiance writer.

You have good pace, nice detail, and especially good at getting desscriptions, details and points made.

That touch with Dilandau and the rose was a good one too.

Kudos to you!

I shall faithfully await the arrival of tyour next chapter!

-Till then

nice fic! it's really good for a first and i'm certain you'll get even better. YAY DILLY! ijust wish he wud kill Miguel instead of Gaddes. :( all well. UPDATE!

criticise it! well i thought it was awesome. i love the plot so far and am excited to read more. i see you put Dilandau in this one. that makes me really happy because honestly he's my favorite villain. i just can't get enough of him. i adored the opening scene. can't have dilly without gore or fire. lmao

it's interesting and definitely has my attention.

only a few grammar/spelling mistakes...but every story has those

all in all...i shall be back to read more!

~fireangel