Reviews for Hit
ficklejam chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
That was so cute! Just when I thought where this fic is heading, you threw the awesome statement and reeled me in. In short, as your title depicted: It hit me XD
Sabishi Tomo chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Love this! Plus, Ban and Himiko are very in character! Nice work. Oh and I'm adding this to my C2 Community. It's called '...Did you have a pleasant dream?...' It's about fics centering around Ban. If you don't want your fic up there though, contact me and I'll remove it from the C2. _
biyatch chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
It was so cute!

(i feel like jumping up and down)

“What the hell- Himiko, you haven’t been sniffing the wrong poisons again, have you? Or glue?”-this one reminded me of a glue i had in grade school...cherry flavor...yumyum! hehehehe

"Himiko never knew that she had hit him where it really mattered a long time ago." i find it really sweet...

and uumm...forgive my ignorance and lack of significant information, specially for someone whole claims to write fics herself, though not the kind that you can be proud of...but...21years old? himiko is 21? and ban is 20? that means he's younger?

im really sorry but i just have to ask it again...what? he's younger than her? really? i didnt know that...i feel so dumb right now..hehehehe

anyway...great fic! love it! will read it again...
C.Queen chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
aw yeah, I can see how hitting him would make a person feel better, especially when that person is Himiko heh.
Yami-chan and Unrealistic chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
YC: lol. That was a good one. Such a nice pairing...heh heh
scorpion05 chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
really cute story! - i't my fav. pairing!

very good written, nice storyline!
shadowluck chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
*snicker* You make me want to ship Ban/Himiko, oh yes. And the premise is lovely; strange how these two have serious trouble telling love and violence apart.
Wielder of paperclips chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
I’m the last person on this earth that would be coy. - I think this line would sound better with 'who' instead of 'that.' _

I don't think there is anything here to improve/change other than that. Excellent plot, excellent style. It's so... happy. XD I bet Rabid Lola loved

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That clinches it, thought Ban as he rolled to the side, neatly avoiding a kick. She must have been really stressed out to issue such a stupid command. What was the point in staying still if it meant he was going to turn into Fuyuki Shido?

(Somewhere else in Shinjuku, a certain Beastmaster sneezed.)- Hahahahahahahahaha! A fic with Ban in it isn't complete without dissing Shido, right? XD

Ban watched the expression of pure, unadulterated expression of incense on her face while he took a few minutes to catch his breath on a convenient ledge. He wondered briefly if this was what Kagami felt like all of the time, forever floating about four feet above your opponents, slowly driving them into blinding anger with polite yet totally infuriating calmness.

…Kagami was a freak to do this 24/7, decided Ban as Himiko caught up with him. - Yes, I like this whole part. *laugh* Yes, it was an interesting speculation. Go Ban. XD

“What the hell- Himiko, you haven’t been sniffing the wrong poisons again, have you? Or glue?” - *is imagining Himiko sniffing a bottle of Elmer's glue* Himiko going high on glue? That I have to see. XD

Okay, all the BanHimiko moments were so... 'Aw!' Yeah. Aww moments. XD I really can't think of any other way to describe 'em. *shrug* But I liked it. To the favorites section!

Keep up the good work! XD
Tastywheat chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Nice story. Some of the phrases were really funny, especially the one on Shido. Only constructive criticism I have is that you should include a reason for Himiko to go crazy and start picking a fight with Ban. Without it, she just seems kinda nuts, no depth to the character. Always back up each character's actions. Other than that, very nicely done.
Rabid Lola chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Really, really loved you? Heh, Ban, ang kapal ng mukha mo. _ (translation: you're so presumptious. Sorry, can't think of a simpler word. XD)

Kagami was a freak to do this 24/7 - *snortchokelaugh* hehe.

I liked this. _ (I'll squeal my heart out later, in private. XDD) But this was nice, because it can actually be platonic. Almost. _

...Oh dear. Your author's note. _;; I love your comments, too.

I also liked how it managed to be angsty, at first, but humourous, at the same time. :D

And it took me a long time to review because I no longer have TIME to access the internet on weekdays. . It's fics like this that make it worth it, though. :D

Yay, YunCyn! :D :D :D
Endless chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
LOVE IT! ) it's been so long since i've read a VERY GOOD fic. it's funny, entertaining, and you'll feel a tingly something after finishing the story. I really love it! i hope you'd make more! D well, till then!
marbles chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
ah... sweet sweet ban/himiko fluff... its been too long since i had my last dose of a particularly great fanfic XD great job, as usual! :D
Atropos' Knife chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Hallo! Glad to see you're back into a GB groove again hehe. :P

Anyway, this is such a nice, subtle IC piece and I like how you left it all very open-ended, vague, and rife with issues - much like Ban and Himiko's complicated relationship actually is in canon.

Yes, even after a supposed five years. :)

And I love how you used 'hit' as a metaphor on so many different levels - anger, forgiveness, family, affection - that the actual 'hit' almost becomes an afterthought. Lovely. )

Wonderful job as usual. Looking forward to more great stuff from you in the near future. V

Cheers!
Ersatz of Kira chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
That was nice. Hitting something (or someone) is always good relief when having a bad day.