Aww that was adorable :) But now i need to check out your other sics to see if you have wrote any other goings on between them! Um i have a quick question, whats all the: "it I was /I time" This confused me a little but i read around it, so good job! (:

The colors of Luna must be beautiful. Hermione is so lucky.

Again, I like the tentative ending. Great job! I also like the previous pairing with Pansy.

awe, that was lovely! i love the way luna talks about the colors. great job!

Your story is very sweet and romantic.

The idea that Luna wait for Hermione to be ready for a relationship together, supporting her, is original. It breaks the general image of Luna that she is always with his head in the clouds, but you describe her attention to even the smallest details, always in her own way.

I also like the fact that Hermione feels ready to start knowing Luna as a future mate, starting to overcome her grief for the death of Pansy.

Very well written

Claudia

I adore this. You do an astonishingly good job of making just about any two characters seem believable together. This story is so sweet, and your characterisation of Luna is perfect. Excellent job. :)

aw, sweet.

What in the name of Heaven is a Hoffiskin? It took me ages to figure out what a Crumple Horned Snorkack was and now there's ANOTHER one I have to learn?

Anyways, overall I enjoyed it. I don't need to tell you my opinion on girl/girl again. I have done it countless times. What I will tell you (again) is that you are a wonderful author and I am thoroughly enjoying reading your work.

-Jenn

Luna is so ridiculously lovable, with her nonsensical blabbering and painful honesty. Who couldn't love her? Hermione will- in time (:

This was a very sweet story, good job. I think I saw this in a LJ community but i can't remember.

when i read these types of stories I always imagine jkr cringing at the thought of what people are doing to her character's personalities. lol. but it was a funny read. thanks.

Great fic. Love it.

That's really good! I didn't know that hermione and luna would make such a nice couple-type-item-thingeh.. o_o.. sequel please!