I don't like Sen's stubbornness. Sen is the worst daughter Chihiro never ever even deserves to have on her own. Chihiro and Haku should've married each other back then before.

oh..how come she hasn't told them that she is not the sen they once knew? and poor haku! though the hug was sweet. let me guess, haku will end up with sen instead of her mom? in a way that's sad, but it will really just depend on how you write the story. i'll be looking forward to reading more, so please continue.

update soon.

very interesting plot and very well-written forward to read more of it.

i didnt realise it was only four chapters long T_T

two criticisms that i have - it seems unrealistic that sen still holds with her *fantasies are just fantasies* after having been in this world for so long... and i don't see the justification for sen keeping her real identity secret - wouldn't they welcome chihiro's daughter just as well?

otherwise, i'm enjoying this a lot, and i hope you have forsaken it _

so far, one of the best spirited away ffs ive read - it's realistic, with excellent characterisation that's consistent with the feel of the original movie good work

i'm really enjoying this fanfic. hope you will write more. i really want to know what happenrd to Haku.

HEy, i kno its really late to type a review. But, i really like the story and i hope to see an other chapter of Broken Promises. Will, thats it for now. Bye

Wimmern, das ist hübsches gutes. Sie sollten zu gehen halten. Ernsthaft Bin Ich denkend an das Schreiben einer Spirited Away Ventilatorerfindung, aber mich, haben Sie nicht meinen Film in der Hand.

~Magan

if du had nein idea to was ich just said, ich said its a gut story. lol, just joshin ya, i'm very good with english. good story, keep it up. You'd better update asap. ;)

i'll keep you on my alert list jic(just in case)

Whoa, great chapter! So it's Zeniba that Yubaba's held. Your story is awesome! i really like your descriptions and pacing, and i really want to find out more! Pls update soon!

cool story

Wow, this is pretty good. I like the fact that Sen is not one of us people with our head in the clouds. Scary.. I haven't watched Spirited Away for about a year but I have seen Howl's Moving Castle, I believe is the English title. Not as good as SA but still Miyazaki blows me away...

WOW! This is a great story, it really does the film tonnes of justice, well done I loved every bit!

I'd like to see what you think of my fic, depth perception!

Thanks!

I am really, really enjoying this story, although I don't think Yubaba would really be that cruel to her own sister, if Zeniba is the one she's holding. Anyway, I hope you update soon! :D

Ahh...what a great chapter! i love your descriptions and how you keep the plot flowing...i can't wait to see waht happens next! Is the prisoner in the dungeon Haku? Will Sen meet him eventually? i'll be wating for your next update, love your story!D

ive been looking around forever at all of the spirited away fanfiction searching out for that one piece that i know id bookmark and return to check over and over in one day to see if it had been updated and ive finally found it! thank you so much for this wonderful story! i hope that you'll enchant us with another helping soon! until then, i've got you bookmarked! please update soon!