Reviews for Pictures of Sunset
Clover chapter 6 . 1/31/2019
Please for the love of Wonka update! I am so loving this story.
Ghoul99 chapter 6 . 3/14/2014
I love it
XpixieXsticksX chapter 6 . 10/1/2011
Love your Willy Wonka story. I'm happy he's starting to warm up to her a bit. Hope it continues.
Boredom-kills-big-time chapter 6 . 7/31/2011
No matter what other people have said about this, it is very good. You have carefully thought out Willy and this has shown in your work. I like how you have made him like a smaller child, shy and timmid at time but also has that streek of wanting to please and be right all the time. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

B/K/B/T
crazyreader95 chapter 6 . 6/29/2011
How can you leave us hanging like this! GREAT CHAPTER! PLS UPDATE! NOW!
touky chapter 6 . 4/2/2011
Aaaaaahhhhhhh sooooo cuye! Well I have a sugestion if you want not to take personal or anything kay?so you could say tha instead of the tickets they already happened and that Willy did not forgive Charlie and did not have creatives block so has not seen his dad therefor she comes in and changes his mind gives him love then hapily ever chocolate! Just a little sugestion also update soon I loved itand the story is awsome
bitemebeezlebub chapter 6 . 3/8/2011
I definitely don't think she's like a Mary Sue, she actually has a personality that isn't totally perfect!

She works well, I think, since she kind of has to be blunt when it comes to Willy; he has next to no social interaction, and the kind he has hasn't been very positive.

Do you think you're going to be continuing this story at all? I really like it so far :)
AuthenticRadiance chapter 6 . 8/28/2010
Hey is wilbur wonka going to be in the next chapter
AuthenticRadiance chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
I can't rmember but i think this is the best story i have read in a while an di also can't remember but i think someone made some wonka chcolate products i am pretty sure i had some but since i am shamefully addicted tp chocolate and as i am saying this i am actually stuffing my face bith a boost god they ra etasty.
mistofan chapter 6 . 8/4/2010
I love this story. Please continue it :) you are an amazing writer!
takara410 chapter 6 . 2/22/2010
wow love it more and her ei thought there were not anymore good oc stories with wonka
Astra-The-Goddess chapter 6 . 6/8/2009
OH MY GOD! SHE KISSED HIM! HE KISSED HER! YES YES YES!
Y0urDownfall chapter 6 . 3/11/2009
OMG! MORE MORE MORE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! GAH! AWESOME STORY!
Alaina chapter 6 . 11/21/2008
Write more! Write MORE! I love it! I think that they are so cute together. Please make another chapter! I loved when they kissed and Willy was all inexperienced and shy and cute!EEP! Write more!
RetteMitch chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
really great first chapter! i dont have time to read the rest right now, but i'm definitely going to later!

PS...i DO love your Dr. Wonka:)
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