Reviews for The Phantom
Roxypockets1 chapter 6 . 2/13/2018
I just found this story and wish I had been on this site sooner so I could’ve reviewed it when it was still active. I love this story! The love “triangle” is really interested and I’m dying to know how this one will play out. I also love how the writing tightened up and really progressed after that gap. I hope someday you’ll return to this again, I’d love to see where your writing will take this and how the story might have changed since it’s been so long. Thank you so much for your hard work!
Guest chapter 6 . 11/25/2017
Bonjour serait il possible qu'il y est une suite car j'aime beaucoup vote history merci
Usa3 chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
I really like this story. I think it would be a great idea to have Usagi and Mamoru bond over flowers because in the moon kingdom, they showed Serenity picking a bunch of flowers from the garden. I also think you should have Motoki secretly push Usagi and Mamoru together and Minako push Sailor Moon and Tuxedo Kamen together.
buttaflykissesxoxo chapter 6 . 3/14/2011
I really like it. It's gonna drive me crazy waiting for an update.
jupiterfalls chapter 6 . 3/14/2011
I absolutely love this story. Please update a lot. I dont want to wait 5 years lol

Btw, I LOVE IT!
lee chapter 6 . 3/14/2011
This is definitely the best Sailor Moon story I ever came across on this entire site. Really, really good! Youve nailed all the characters and I absolutely love how you thew the spirit of Endymion in this plot as well - makes it a lot more interesting! Plus, the love triangle is unique and I adore it... the story - YOUR story - is just perfect :) Please update soon?
Shinobi of life chapter 6 . 3/13/2011
? is mamoru part of endy's soul that was reborn but not complete?
SerentiyMoonGodness chapter 6 . 3/13/2011
great chapter
ARABELLA VIOLETTA chapter 6 . 3/13/2011
"Usagi wasn't aware of the shadow that followed her, an expression of growing concern adorning his face"...ouch poor guy don't get me wrong I'm happy for the change of events with Usa and Mamoru even Toki's reaction was hilarious but i fell so bad for Endy he loves her so much and for such a long time ...sigh.

I loved the idea with the rose and the power of love it makes me remember when Bery'l body was breaking because of his rose in the anime...sigh

Thank you for the update wonderful job.
vixen519 chapter 5 . 3/10/2011
First - sooooooooooo glad you've updated again (I -really- enjoy this fic!), I totally understand not getting back to a fic after a few years. I myself am on a -major- writer's block for my own SM fic.

Second - This chapter was wonderful, other seemed a tad short (almost like a mini-one shot) but this one made up for it with all the descriptive stuff and dialogue :D.

As for the romantic place they can have their feeling develop...how about multiple places? Like The park, a lake, on top of a building after a fight while their still transformed, on one of their walks / interactions in the morning to school. Ya know?

~Vixen519
Brizzy chapter 5 . 3/10/2011
cant wait for more

:-) ~ :-) ~ :-) ~ :-) ~ :-)
Sweetmaj010 chapter 5 . 3/10/2011
nice story...i love endy...but how about since so far everything was almost about the rose...how about them meeting or randomly seeing each other in a rose garden.
ARABELLA VIOLETTA chapter 5 . 3/10/2011
I can't help but fell so sad for Endymion,poor guy he is doing the impossible for her and Usa is beginning to see Mamoru in a different idea of the story is great it dose go so well with the 3 of them.
SerentiyMoonGodness chapter 5 . 3/10/2011
Great chapter
SerentiyMoonGodness chapter 4 . 3/9/2011
great story so far!
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